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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting direction you're going in....can't wait until she reveals her self...but don't do it too quickly..I'm enjoying the ploys..
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this...an old pagan tale has a veiled woman of the morning mist
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have to write more!! the first chapter is so good!! What i would like to see happen is that hermione has to get info out of molfoy for the order. She does this as pancy and doesnt know malfoy already knows its not her. So when she comes over he does wathever until she turns to Hermione. Draco is repulsed first but thinks about all the things he could do to her. Something like that maby??
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really think you should continue this story
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i think he should follow her maybe!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gos, you simply MUST continue..what a great start to a fic. And I can already see the flamers going on about how this is OOC for Hermione....don't listen to them. Who's to say our favorite Gryffindor girl *wouldn't* do that!? :) Please write more...pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! So you asked for suggestions on where to take the story:
Maybe have Hermione continue to act like Pansy and Draco "play along" for a few more encounters trying to pick up clues about who it is. Then when he finally has a pretty good idea about who it is, he could suggest some bondage games during sex, like using ties or rope then when she goes to tie him up he'll over power her and tie her up instead, fucking her brains out repeatedly until the Polyjuice wears off. Then maybe he could use her her deception against her. Like stealing ingredients for Polyjuice potion and forcing him to engage in non consensual sex as blackmail to get *other things* he wants...
::shrug:: whatever you come up with I'm sure will be fine, you've done a great first chapter so far,so wherever you decide to take the story just please update soon!
Maybe have Hermione continue to act like Pansy and Draco "play along" for a few more encounters trying to pick up clues about who it is. Then when he finally has a pretty good idea about who it is, he could suggest some bondage games during sex, like using ties or rope then when she goes to tie him up he'll over power her and tie her up instead, fucking her brains out repeatedly until the Polyjuice wears off. Then maybe he could use her her deception against her. Like stealing ingredients for Polyjuice potion and forcing him to engage in non consensual sex as blackmail to get *other things* he wants...
::shrug:: whatever you come up with I'm sure will be fine, you've done a great first chapter so far,so wherever you decide to take the story just please update soon!
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yep, now tht a hermione I see in the shadows..so where's the rest???...is he hooked from one taste????
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it. I vote continue. I would definitely like to see where you take this!
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?