rate_review Reviews

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER IS SHOWS HOW PEOPLE ARE VERY VAIN WHEN THEY THINK THEY HAVE A PART THAT CAN NOT BE TAKEN AWAY BUT THEN IS FACED WITH THE FACT THAT IT CAN AND WILL BE.

KEEP UP WITH THE WORK AND CONTINUE TO WRITE THIS GREAT STORY!!!!!!!

THIS IS A GREAT CHAPTER AND PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE THANKS

Hmm.. so will they figure out that Loki is Harry Potter I wonder.

I really like this story :) It's so original... Keep up the good work, I can't wait for your next update!!

So far a really good story!
That being said I have to say the ending of this chapter seems a little forced or fast. Take out that last paragraph and you'd have a nice litte cliffie with a cute mental picture of a wide eyed Loki (Harry). Just a thought.
As I said though this is really good so far!

Finally that girl(forgot her name sorry) got what she deserved. This is geeting good. Update soon.

I do hope you update soon! I love triad stories and with the addition of Voldie making a quiad they are going to be almost super powerful.

I do frevently hope that you aren't going to make Harry super submissive... I hate the dom/slave thing... I much prefer them as equal partners. Being willing to let someone take care of you doesn't necessarily make you some type of submissive its letting your partner do someting that makes everyone happy.

Please do update soon and ignore my little rant it wasn't necessarily pointed at you..
So far I've found your story very interesting...

well this should be intresting... wonder what shell try to do now... will she plot or disaper? but oh well she was a snob... is the second daughter any better? hope so... what will happen with Loki now? when will they findout who he was first befor he was adopted... was he just adopted... or was it a blood and magic adoption? humms... hope that youll up-dates soon... oh and thanks for answering my questions!

wow! i love your story. your plot line is intriguing and i can't wait to read more. please update again soon!

wait... what happened to the up-date... *sniff* im dying to read the next chapter... please please pelase post it soon!