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for Arabian Wizards

by LytenaKye

person LytenaKye
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Sorry for the long time w/out an update but I've hit some writer's block. I'm working on it.
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, cant wait till the next chapter! Hope to see it soon! This is turning out to be a spectacular story and very original. CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!!!! When do you plan to make the next post?
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello, Are you going to update this story any time soon I really would like to read more.
Mira~
person amyordinary
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I've missed your updates. This is a wonderful story. I hope that real life and your writing goes well so that you can update again soon.
person Nonny
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it
update soon
person Lucifoy
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please update soon
person Nita
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiya

just wanted that i am lovin this fic and cant wait for the updates to happen...poor loki but im sure he will be happy with tom/lucius/severus...cant wait for more...have fun writin

-Nita
person Anon
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM


Absolutly captivating!
Though I would advise
you not to use () as
much. It disrupts your
otherwise flowing writing.
Still, your talent
fairly offsets any slight
mistakes you make.
But there is always time
to go over your chapter
for gammar; it makes a
world of differance.
Anyway, I believe your
foursome has alot of
potential! The combo
of your attentive Tom
(I can call him that,
right?) aloof Lucius,
grumpy Severus and
shy Loki will be very
good together. It
leaves me wondering
where you will go from
here.
I will be checking in,

Sensibly,
ScathingSarcasm
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic. Hope to see more soon!
person sanda
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thx for the info it helps