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October 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I kinda saw it coming and kinda didn't. Great story :)
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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I thought it was a dream but not to that extent! This was bloody brilliant and wonderful and awesome and... I'm gushing. Sorry bout that. No, really though, this was frickin awesome. I wonder if that was the first time that happened or if it's happened before... that would make sense.
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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
holy hell! He killed Snape!... I think? I mean, I read the story ten times before I decided Snape must be dead for his eyes to still be open... poor sevvie.
Poor Lupin, I doubt he'll understand it like Snape did but hey, at least he'll give away some secrets!
Poor Lupin, I doubt he'll understand it like Snape did but hey, at least he'll give away some secrets!
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it is really very good, fantastic and brilliant plot with shocking twist, your story is a little gem.
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June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is good, my I so confused.
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May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome!! 10 out of 10! clever twist, fantastic plot, brilliant dialogue... i could go on.
absolutely LOVED it!
lil
absolutely LOVED it!
lil
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect!!!
It's sad, but I love the end. Poor Remus...
It's sad, but I love the end. Poor Remus...
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story... it was really scary when Snape realized those things like the suddenly appearing pitcher and the date on the newspaper. And of course Lupin's red eyes...
And the end... well, a bit confusing... does he have to relive it again and again? Would be like Voldemort... Snape's personal version of hell :D
But maybe it was only a dream... you never know...
Do you have any more stories? You ff.net account seems to be broken...
Best wishes,
miffi
And the end... well, a bit confusing... does he have to relive it again and again? Would be like Voldemort... Snape's personal version of hell :D
But maybe it was only a dream... you never know...
Do you have any more stories? You ff.net account seems to be broken...
Best wishes,
miffi
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was very interesting. I assume that Snape died at the end when Voldy did the wand flick -- but what was the scene after that? I'm confused... :D
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April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hrm...you should continue this to get closure. I mean you do it but there is something missing other than hot smut...lol It is very well written :) I hope to see you add a little more and since you said One Shot, I would like to see some SMUT with Snape and Remus, mwuhahahaahaha *thumbs up*