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different yet interesting. Not so cool about harry not being able to get to his own magic. Other than that im looking forward to the next chapter.

... now this is a twist that i havent seen before... hope that you can up-dates soon i cant wait to see what happens... will he really send harry dreams???

i love your story. please update soon

Awesomeness!!!

My interest is piqued. You have an interesting plot here though I would like to point out that its a bit unbleviable that you gave Sevvie so much control over harry.. it kinda makes me wonder if he is going to abuse said powers.. and what will happen to Harry if Sev decides he is doing to much and shuts off his magic ( I hope Im understanding that right LOL)? Another thing is where exactly is Harry standing on said war, is he against his Father or is he for his Father..I understand he doesnt want to be heir but that doest say where he stands. Also why give Sevvie so much more power than the DL and Dumbles when the prophesy written ( which by the way was the whole reason for the attack on Harry's parents) says basically Harry will defeat the DL? Which brings up my final issue.. what happened to Harry's adopted parents and Voldie the night they were killed? You have an interesting plot line going but I think you have a few holes you need to work out.. the biggest being the parent issue.. I mean if Voldie knows Harry is his son.. why did he still AK him?

Also I would like to ask if you could put spaces between your paragraphs, it was a little difficult to follow because of that. Other than a few mispelled words and the stated above I think you have a really good story going here and I totally look forward to your next update.. Keep up the good work and I hope that this review is helpful to you

Ja ne

Very original. I love Dom Sev and this is one of the fic that's going to be very interesting... Please continue. I can't wait for the next chapter. And no according to me it's not rushed.

Oooooh! I like it!(Though the real name is a bit, er, crappy... sorry!)Update soon!

Interesting story. Looking forward for the next chapter.

i liked it.. very original, i just found it.. dont abandon it please

Please continue! Good start!