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October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm beyond curious. I know the story is on hold, but please hurry and continue. I'm sure it will be worth the wait!
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June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!that was insane-ly good!! i mean it!plz update!! XD
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Update soon?
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August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 6!
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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 5! Severus was able to break free. Hmmm.
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THis story is so different and so original that you need to be commmended on a job well done. This is an excellent story and I can hardly wait to see where you take this. I hope you keep up the good work and I hope your computer gets fixed in record time. I speak from personal experience when I say that having your computer die on you is one of the most crippling experiences one can feal, you know, aside from actual crippling. :/
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It happens hope you get it fixed or replaced soon.
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 4! Will Harry and Draco become friends anyway?
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April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay thank you for updating! I wanr more of this story. I love it.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the direction your story is going so far. The plot is original and holds my interest. However, I do have some questions:
Your second paragraph makes no sense to me. What cell? What Instructor? Are you talking about Hagrid or Madam Malkin? (which makes no sense to me, as they're not professors) Is Harry having a flashback of some sort? Since you didn't italicize (or otherwise indicate any flashback) I'm assuming it isn't.
This happens again in the seventh paragraph. Dose Draco really say these things, or is Harry imagining it? Once again, you might want to let the reader know when harry is having a flashback. For example: Harry suddenly realized that was not what the boy was really saying. He turned his attention from the past back to the present.
A little after that, you wrote:
Your second paragraph makes no sense to me. What cell? What Instructor? Are you talking about Hagrid or Madam Malkin? (which makes no sense to me, as they're not professors) Is Harry having a flashback of some sort? Since you didn't italicize (or otherwise indicate any flashback) I'm assuming it isn't.
This happens again in the seventh paragraph. Dose Draco really say these things, or is Harry imagining it? Once again, you might want to let the reader know when harry is having a flashback. For example: Harry suddenly realized that was not what the boy was really saying. He turned his attention from the past back to the present.
A little after that, you wrote: