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person Techboy77
schedule July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am aware that you might have abandoned this project, and I am sad for that. I enjoyed reading it very much.
person Deatheatergrl
schedule March 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
please finish this story, I'm in love with it!
person melkS
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow I really like your fanfic! it started really badly for poor Ginny but she might start to see the light!
person Lauren
schedule July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
At first, I wasn't entirely a fan of the story because Voldemort wasn't in it till later.
But now, I really ... really ... really reeeeeeeally like it and want it to keep going
:(
person memberonetrillion
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm really enjoying this story. Love the idea of a muggle work camp. The end scene between ginny and the voldermort seemed a little rushed? Really hope this isn't the end and that you carry on with this :-) look forward to reading more x x
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok this story is sad but i love all the friends she has made.i am not yet done with it yet. i am at the part where she meets the dark lord. but i was horrfied when Rose died. i literally cried. which brings me to my question: that guy at night thought he was fucking Ginny, right? not Rose. so if ginny was gonna have a meeting with the dark lord, and that dude thought he was fucking ginny, why did he burn her alive (it was rose of coarse) but i am just puzzled at that. but i do like the story. it is very saddening, and hopefully they will escape (again i have not read all of it...so dont spoil it for me plz) well TTFN
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had read this before Lust is a new chapter please dont end there ok
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHHHHHHH!! How could you stop there? That's just cruel. Update soon. Please?
schedule May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I actually REALLY like the plot to this story. I think if you had a beta, you might receive more reviews -- while your style is concise and clear, the writing is in slight need of a tweaking. For example, there are some grammatical and mechanical errors. However, I think you have Ginny's personality down perfectly. Tom/Voldemort's is a little contrived, and some of the better known Death Eaters (Draco, Lucius, Snape) also seem a little out of character. Like I said, all you need is a beta to make this story perfect. I know you crave reviews, so I hope this satisfies you. ;D I can't wait for the next chapter. The plot is thickening and I really like where its going.
person stacey
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story. please write another chapter.