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person Tooolbox
schedule July 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(First review on this site, I figure this is sent directly to the author so excuse me if it is not.)

An excellent story so far! Stories with interesting concepts like these are hard to come by and I admit I was very intrigued when I read the summary. Your writing is very descriptive without stalling, and I admired your foreword describing the various demons at the start. I had heard of a Cambion but never known what it was.

The only thing I can ask for is more! Even though you updated this story just a week ago, I can't help but be eager for more. *Looks for a way to get updates on specific stories* Anyway I like this story very much so far but I can't wait to see what becoming an Incubus does to Harry, and the reactions Ginny has that are hinted at in the description.

Best of luck!
person Selera
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohuh...
person kratos
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad keep up the good work
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody brilliant
person Cancan227
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait!!!!
person red
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok this is good please update soon
person MrGalion
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM

I Like it. update soon.
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start! I as much as others, am sure, can't wait for more!