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for The Submissive

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person anniea
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story is so hot! i keep coming back to it. but it makes me wonder.....how did Snape become to be so submissive? it's a strange combo. Harry is a master that bottoms (so to speak). wish there was a story to go with this one-shot of how this couple came to be. *kisses*
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, holy fuck! Yep, need a towel. Again. Dammit.
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lord that was so intense. My chair has become decidedly slippery, and my brain is now moosh. Thank you for sharing...so very much.
person YaoiPerv
schedule February 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Ahaha....wow...yeah....that was good...Very incredibly good...and hot...Good job!
person sanda
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, the story definately took a turn *grins*. nice job, cheers!
person Hambares
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this take on their relationship. Snape "topping" while Harry really does!
person liza
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was really cool. i don't usually lcare for dom/harry, sub/severus stories. somehow they seem unrealistic. but you pulled it off without losing character or it being cheesey. this piece of writing was hot, deliciously smutty and flawless. great job.