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Well? More, please. I want to find out if Severus can manage to salvage this and get to a happily-ever-after with Harry. If you're one of the writers on the site who use and email update list to notify your readers of your story updates please add me to the list for this story. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm

uhm, would you like a beta of some kind? You are nineteen years old according to your profile, and this story could be very good, but your grammar is about as bad as I have ever seen. If you want help -- please contact me.