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for April Fool

by CyanaWhite

schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quite cute. Original idea at least. :)
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! It was funny and sweet. Didn't Ron know he could never get the best of Hermione?
person MB3
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha. That was great. So what if it was a little OOC, it was entertaining. A very nice piece of fluff, well done.
person megs
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Fucking loved it that was the best story ever!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!


MEGS
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit of a Ron fan but I can't help but laugh at this one... it was hilarious... did he seriously think that he could outwit Snape and Hermione???

Brilliant one shot! Loved it for its OOCness.
person J
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. loved it so much lol. snape and hermione - whoo!
person Dixie50
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very cute. I always find Ron extremely irritating so I thoroughly enjoyed this fic. Also the sex was great !
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Delightful. Although the spiders are a bit cruel, don't you think? The sexually suggestive monkey's tail rocked.
person Rosamund
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it when Ron gets humiliated for being a prat...better than angst he causes my favorite girl in some stories (and the last book). Great job!!!