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for April Fool

by CyanaWhite

person Anon
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great mix of humor and sex, but the spiders are unnecessarily cruel to Ron--he's not a little scared, he's practically phobic. Don't think Hermione would be quite that mean. It's cute that they never realize that they're locked in. The one time Ron does some serious research . . .
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person misslala
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like that, it was fun :)

I wanted to ask you about your review on my story "Open Me" You said be careful not to lose the reader's interest, I was just wondering what made it lose interest for you? I am still fairly new at writing so I am trying to honestly get better.
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have got to post another story,,,that was great.....
person Lucy
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahaha
That really made my day.
It was funny, ron bashing, and well written.
Well done!
person DB1
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL awesome story, i know it was to be a one shot but maybe you could continue it??? its a great story!!!!

*DB*
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DarkLady
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gods that was hilarious! I am an out of the closet Ron hater so I adored it!