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for Captive Bride

by desertdreamer

schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! This is so original and it forces you to pay attention to catch all of the nuances. Shame on Draco, being such a poor actor, when he has spouted his feelings over and over again. Can't wait to see where you go with this. p
schedule December 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate when I catch up on a really great story. Please finish it, no matter how long it takes with your own life coming first. Wonderful story with an amazing plot. Looking forward to more? p
person TammaraG
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far, I do hope that you will continue with it
person ech1964
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am very interested in your story and especially want to continue to follow it. I don't know how to set favorites on AFF (if that is even possible), so do you have a website or another way to notify your readers of updates? My e-mail is mwwhaley @yahoo, if you have a notification list. Thank you for a wonderful plotline. I am truly enjoying how you are portraying the capture brides and how they adapt to their new positions.
schedule June 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
person Citten
schedule June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well I am so interested now!!! what is he is doing with luna? well I do hope that you will be posting and soon so we can see! well I wonder how lucius is going to get them out of this and will get to know what they were doing before the arrived at the little gathering? it will be interesting to see what voldymort is going to do. will she be punished for her out burst or will lucius? PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update soon and do try to not keep us waiting too long!!!! :)
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update the story soon?

Carla
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. When is Chapter 11 and any other chapters going to be added. I'm dying to know what happens with the rest of the story.

Carla
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.