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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I wonder, do you happen to be a buffy the vampire slayer fan? I mean Alexander Harrison!!! was that A coincidence that if you took away the 'son' you have a buffy character?
The last two chapters seem to be a litte messed up. there are letters and punctuation all over the place. is there something wrong with the program you use?
Other than that problem your story was awesome I loved it. I hope there will be just a little anger at snape from harry when he regains all of his memories.\ snape was so mean to harry all those years. he could have at least been a little nicer to him. at least as nice to him as he was to other students. he shouldn't have singled him out like that. :(
XOXOXOXOXO
Dragon
I wonder, do you happen to be a buffy the vampire slayer fan? I mean Alexander Harrison!!! was that A coincidence that if you took away the 'son' you have a buffy character?
The last two chapters seem to be a litte messed up. there are letters and punctuation all over the place. is there something wrong with the program you use?
Other than that problem your story was awesome I loved it. I hope there will be just a little anger at snape from harry when he regains all of his memories.\ snape was so mean to harry all those years. he could have at least been a little nicer to him. at least as nice to him as he was to other students. he shouldn't have singled him out like that. :(
XOXOXOXOXO
Dragon
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August 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More, more, please. You've got a marvelous story going here, and I'm very interested in seeing what happens in the rest of it. Poor Charlie. From your setup here, it looks like there's a core of "The Master's" followers that aren't faithful, and I can't wait to find out what happens next. If you're one of the writers on this site that use email lists to notify of story updates, please add me to your list. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
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August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... i just... wow. This as got to be the best fanfic I have read in a long time. It`s so full of suprises. Peter in love with Tom Riddle, Poppy the master, Sirius and Remus daughter, I loved her animagus form! LOL I miss some reactions on Poppy taking over the Ministry though. And will you be explaining what went on behind the veil? Sirius giving birth and all that?
I really like this story (but not Sev as the bottom, but I guess you can`t have it all). I am looking forward to the next update. It is so exiting! It`s been a long time since I`ve read a so original Snarry.
Please keep writting.
I really like this story (but not Sev as the bottom, but I guess you can`t have it all). I am looking forward to the next update. It is so exiting! It`s been a long time since I`ve read a so original Snarry.
Please keep writting.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story! I feel bad for the present Severus, you could tell that he is hurting a lot, but I am happy and enjoying the activities from the past Severus. He and Harry make such a cute couple.
Brilliant idea for Sirius to come out with a baby on his arms.
Is Charlie and Percy bad? Or are they acting as spies?
Poppy is nothing but a conniving bitch. (Well at least in this story she is ^_^) I felt bad for Charlie. Though he does make a cute pair with Neville.
Please update chapter 21 soon. ^_~
Brilliant idea for Sirius to come out with a baby on his arms.
Is Charlie and Percy bad? Or are they acting as spies?
Poppy is nothing but a conniving bitch. (Well at least in this story she is ^_^) I felt bad for Charlie. Though he does make a cute pair with Neville.
Please update chapter 21 soon. ^_~
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!! MORE! NOW!
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh the baby is a very very nice touch along with lily and james. Poppy is just eeeeeeeeeewwwww and Draco has just flipped his lid I think. I love it update soon
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE SOON?
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, Veritaserum as a lube?? Now that's a use I be the MOM doesn't know about. Talk about a weapon for a spy to utilize for 'pillow talk'! LoL
This story is full of imagination and surprising twists (an evil!/Poppy and bitter-hateful/Charlie? Sure didn't see those coming!)
A lot of work has gone into this fic, with trying to keep track of two separate and coinsiding timelines at the same time (what a nightmare, couldn't get me to do it, go you!) and it's a shame there isn't more reviews. It definitly deserves more. Just hang in there and keep doing what you're doing, I think you're doing a fine job.
This story is full of imagination and surprising twists (an evil!/Poppy and bitter-hateful/Charlie? Sure didn't see those coming!)
A lot of work has gone into this fic, with trying to keep track of two separate and coinsiding timelines at the same time (what a nightmare, couldn't get me to do it, go you!) and it's a shame there isn't more reviews. It definitly deserves more. Just hang in there and keep doing what you're doing, I think you're doing a fine job.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh now that was an amusing situation. Great chapter.
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story ^^ Those time lapses are killing me sometimes but they are just so thrilling so I can live with it! Please don't stop writing even if it takes you some time to post (begs)! Meanwhile I'll be working on revealing the mystery why Siverus likes muffins so mych (laughs)