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Chapter 1 (continued)--I am going to die. I am going to die if I read more than one chapter in one sitting of this story because my brain explodes. (Not that I mind, mind you...but I certainly can't be expected to write a short or coherent review if you INSIST on keeping up this delicious hottness)

That...was....SO....bloody....hott! *falls to knees with Yami in front of altar* I bow to you, you lovely writers, you! And FUCK YOU for making me cry with such sweetness at the end of Chapter 1!!! (Yes, I made it to the end!!!! woo of...chapter...one...3 more to go until I'm caught up....better start digging my grave now!)

Actually, no not "FUCK YOU"...."HEY YOU, HAVE HARRY FUCK DRACO" or something to that effect...haha

I love you guys for writing this! Okay, I'm going to try for Chapter 2...and I think that I might have to go with reading the ENTIRE chapter before writing the review...if I can even do that...because writing the review WHILE reading YOUR chapters causes my brain to short circuit and malfunction.

Chapter 2--*giggling madly* I LOVE the naturallnesss (fuck it I can't spell anymore) of Harry and Draco in everyday life! I WANT THAT

YAY THEY GOT IT!!!! *happy dance* Victory sex??? (NO NONO NOT BETWEEN HARRY AND RON!!!! Ack, talk about killing myself! Harry and Draco in one corner...Ron and Hermione in the other....fuck, you have NO idea how much action my backspace key is getting to make these words spelled right!)

Losing grammar...and we're not even to the sex yet! (This is a baaaaaaaaaaaad sign...it must be spillover from the end of Chapter 1...)

GAHHHHHH WHAT I WOULDN'T GIVE TO BE AN ONLOOKER AT THE MINISTRY RIGHT THIS FUCKING SEDOND!!!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOD YES YES HOT KISS!!!!!!! BLAH YEA YES YES EYS YES TAKE A NAP YOU HORNY BOYS!!!!!!!

Okay...going for Chapter 3...so far, so good...I'm loopy (sober...but loopy) but I think this might be the end of me for right now...*shaking with anticipation*

Chapter 3--oh oh oh ohoh even better than I imagined!!!!!! MmmmmmmI remember that parseltongue conversation........GAH now I wanna go reread THAT!!!! (soooooooooooooooooooo ADD!)

Harry......bound....tied up.........*yummy* *flashbacks....* whimpering....much whimpering.....SO FUCKING HOTTTT

aYES YES EYS SAY MY NAME BITCH!!!!! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCKKKKKKING HELL SAY MY NAME BITCH!!!!!

*limp* fucking beautiful...and get Draco a kitten....a magical kitten that stays forever a kitten...

I'm always excited when they go to Malfoy Manor, in every fic, because I love the idea of that house ^^ this was such an amazing chapter, too. All of them were so dumbfounded by the rooms and Draco is such an amazing host lol I wanna live there! haha Need to know what Harry and Draco are going off to do ^_^

Chapter 4--Okay, I'm basically brain dead right now...and completely masochistic because I can't resist clicking the "next chapter" button...

God, what a house!!!! FUCKing christ!!! Oh shit!!!! Merde!!! Merde merde putain de merde!!!! Draco's speaking French again!!!! (PS that was a REALLY vulgar phrase in French I just typed...don't use it around children or your mother haha)

Formal!Draco!!!! *curses happily* I'm gonna die!!! *squealing* AHHHH BRILLIANT CHAPTER!!!! Very nice!!

Chapter three was simply HOT!!! I love the nasty Draco and that chapter was written incredibly. I've just read chapter four and the discription of Malfoy Manor is awesome. Can't wait for an update. What will Harry and Draco do on their first night in the manor?

The last line Draco used on Bill and Fleur was a little corny but sweet. And again another great update.
Please update soon. ^__^

I realize that you have the whole story written out and are only posting one chapter at a time for the sake of your betas, but I am leaving for boot camp in a week and like this story so much i would like to finish reading it before I leave. So I was wondering if you cold email the rest of the chapters to me plz? I don't mind if they are beta'd or not I could maybe even help with beta-ing.

God, i think i love you guys. I mean you come out with a really great story. And I think. Nooo its almost over. And Fanfiction had been in a slum...hardly anything good. Then You say "Oh we are coming out with an equally good second part." Then when i was lamenting the end of a unbelieveably good sequell you come and say "Oh its not over yet we are giving you an (without doubt anylonger) wonderful triquell (is that even a word?). Wonderful chapter. too bad its 323 and i have class at 930 tomorrow morning...thanks for making fanfiction worthlooking at. (if it wasn't for you i think i would stop looking for fanfiction for a few months)

Im am so loving this installment of our favorite boys! I cant wait till the next chapter...you are still my hero :) You have made Harry and Draco the best couple ever, Dracos emotions showed very well in chapter 3. Excellent.