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person swirly
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Boy, after reading for a whole week I finally caught up with you, and it kinda sucks cause now I have to wait for the next chapter to come out. I love this story so far. Something that bothers me though: In the first story you were pretty HBP compliant with Remus and Tonks, but then you brought up a Sirius/Remus relationship, so is Remus just trying to put Tonks off, without admitting that he doesn't like woman that way or what? When are you going to go back to the Horcrux thing, not that don't like all the...umm...smut, but well they have to get rid of Voldemort somehow. And wouldn't he be planning to attack Harry and Draco at the wedding. I hope Narcissa is found soon so that Draco has his mom again. How does the whole Mpreg work, because it doesn't seem as if either Harry or Draco (or anyone else) thinks of that as a possibility? I would think that Harry and Draco could change the aspects of their bond they don't like by repeating a 'bonding' but planning what they say while they do it, that way they can get rid of the whole need to have sex everyday with Harry topping (which you haven't mentioned in a while).

Well, can't wait for the next chapter (and the next one after that, and the one...well you get the point.)
person NightLo
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...I am just thinking while reading chapter 4...as Draco might not have very good experiences/memories in the Manor, can Harry 'help' along in creating new and happy and exciting ones (please note the multiple)?

Well - one more question before I move on - will Cissa appear later in the story?
person NightLo
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, more questions coming instead of comments...so, does the order Harry gave in chapter 3 outdone all other orders in the future? Would Harry remember that particular piece of order and remake it? Or would Harry just ignore and ask Draco to do whatever he wants? Personally I support this idea as they are now married, they should be equal instead of Dom/Sub...though I notice you have put up such warning in the summary...

For the guest list, would Draco re-acquaint with his former Slytherin friends? Especially Pansy, Blaise, Goyle and Crabbe? Would there be interaction later? As some of their fathers knew about the truth, how would the juniors react?

Lastly, is there a possibility for Draco to have his own hand back? Though you have explained clearly before, would Harry try something for this?

BTW, using lilies as flowers is a good choice - as it means 'pure' - a good word to describe their love!
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just to hott hott hott I love your sex and I love your romance. I am so hooked on this story need chapter 8 bad
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! I sooo need chapter 7! Will Severus make trouble at the wedding? Is Narcissa alive? Will she support them?
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, he must be sad about his arm again... I hope he gets over that... I'm looking forward to the wedding.
person Selera
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco.. if only he wasn't stufk with that artificial hand...
person Jan
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gods! I feel so sorry for Draco. I wish there was something you could do for him. Like a miracle happening and the hand coming back out when Voldamort is dead or Hermione or Severus finding a spell or a potion to rebuild his hand, like Voldamort got a body again or something like that. I don't know, I just feel so bad for him and Harry too. Or maybe like Voldy did for Wormtail. Well either ways please update soon. ^__^
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwww poor Draco is so sad! I wants to hug him! Now the question is: is Narcissa alive? *dundundun* and is Snape going to make a big scene out of the wedding thing? *gasp* I need to know! And Draco really needs a proper hug...and a cheering charm. Yep.