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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@4 yes it was a very satisfying chapter, loved all the smutty goodness...update soon
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter. You write good smut my dear.
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4: Well, now I'm dripping wet...from a cold shower. I had to go take one after chapter four. And this was only Part One!!!?? Omigosh, I think I'll need a pacemaker installed before I read Part Two.
I take back not wanting to hear what they had for dinner. That dinner table should be enshrined. I see Lucius got dessert, but when will Hermione have a chance? She might like a 'pop-sicle'. (Lucius is a Pop, so you can draw any conclusion you like...)
Hermione's getting the lion's share of the action, no wonder she's happy with him. So what other colorful, dirty names is he going to call her - she seems to like that, if her reaction is any clue.
I liked getting a peek at her intelligence and success as a potions maker. That makes her meet Lucius on more even ground. What a trade-off...she gets tutelage in the fine art of f**king and he gets the f**king. That's Win-Win if I ever heard one. Definitely has overtones of Slytherin craftiness as a ploy, but it sounds as though maybe the blond wizard is going to discover there's more to Hermione than her ****.
Shower's running - I'm ready for Part Two!!
I take back not wanting to hear what they had for dinner. That dinner table should be enshrined. I see Lucius got dessert, but when will Hermione have a chance? She might like a 'pop-sicle'. (Lucius is a Pop, so you can draw any conclusion you like...)
Hermione's getting the lion's share of the action, no wonder she's happy with him. So what other colorful, dirty names is he going to call her - she seems to like that, if her reaction is any clue.
I liked getting a peek at her intelligence and success as a potions maker. That makes her meet Lucius on more even ground. What a trade-off...she gets tutelage in the fine art of f**king and he gets the f**king. That's Win-Win if I ever heard one. Definitely has overtones of Slytherin craftiness as a ploy, but it sounds as though maybe the blond wizard is going to discover there's more to Hermione than her ****.
Shower's running - I'm ready for Part Two!!
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 4 - Wouldn't we all accept an invitation to dinner from Lucius if we knew this was on the menu for afters?
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March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well done! Especially on the dirty talk bit! -It's hypnotic-erotic almost! (is that a word?)
But what I really want to know is: what was Lucius going on about her fucking another man? Does he have something planned? (hope hope) And WHO? Snape? (please, I love Lucius-Snape double action!) Or Draco? Or ...who?
Also love the thing about Ron, I would like to see what scenario exactly she sent him...
But what I really want to know is: what was Lucius going on about her fucking another man? Does he have something planned? (hope hope) And WHO? Snape? (please, I love Lucius-Snape double action!) Or Draco? Or ...who?
Also love the thing about Ron, I would like to see what scenario exactly she sent him...
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March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: Wowsa!! Oooh, Lucius is sooo bad. I'm sure all your readers were counting each of his slaps as they landed on hundreds of derrieres at the same time (big grin)!
Okay, (gestures to corner to talk in a whisper away from other ravening readers) when can you get rid of Hermione and susbstitute me into your story? I can be available most days if you give me a little warning. I'll make the same sounds as she does and even throw in a few high-pitched screams, how's that? Think about it, okay? 8-)
Great smut as usual. So earthy, with a purity somehow that gets right to the core of the action (hey, no dirty minds making that comment something it wasn't intended to be...much). I don't know what I'm going to do if you actually start giving them a life beyond the physical. I'm so addicted already I don't think I could go lemonless through a whole chapter talking about their reading habits or what they had for dinner.
This is premium smut, lady, dripping deviance at its best. Hmm, speaking of deviance... Can't wait for the next chapter. I don't know if I could stand for each chapter to be any longer, they're so arousing just as they are, but I'l try really hard (okay, another pun slipped out, sorry).
Okay, (gestures to corner to talk in a whisper away from other ravening readers) when can you get rid of Hermione and susbstitute me into your story? I can be available most days if you give me a little warning. I'll make the same sounds as she does and even throw in a few high-pitched screams, how's that? Think about it, okay? 8-)
Great smut as usual. So earthy, with a purity somehow that gets right to the core of the action (hey, no dirty minds making that comment something it wasn't intended to be...much). I don't know what I'm going to do if you actually start giving them a life beyond the physical. I'm so addicted already I don't think I could go lemonless through a whole chapter talking about their reading habits or what they had for dinner.
This is premium smut, lady, dripping deviance at its best. Hmm, speaking of deviance... Can't wait for the next chapter. I don't know if I could stand for each chapter to be any longer, they're so arousing just as they are, but I'l try really hard (okay, another pun slipped out, sorry).
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Lucius. And lemons. And more lemons. Yeah!
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@3. :( i wish they were longer chapters, so i could read more to tide me over till the next chapter....yes i am impatient, its an amzing story so I really want to read more!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was so delicious...i am now completely horny