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@8. hmmm severus and lucius...hope you decide to let seveus into their little games. Awesome chapter, update real soon!!!!

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I am loving this story, in between the very healthy doses of hot sex. Although, this chapter left the feeling of a missed dosage. Can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

really great! love how demanding lucius is, pretty hottt! keep writing!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

nice

@7. great chapter, want to read more, so update soon!!!

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Chapter 7: Now Lucius has added a crop to their bed games? Kinky! This story is getting more and more deliciously twisty - of course with Lucius at the helm it pretty much couldn't do anything else. I know he has a lot to teach his 'pupil', but at some point can he teach her how to apply the crop to him? Equal opportunity and all...

I think his threat to punish her if she came before he allowed her to, was diabolical - she would have to sleep in her own bed and not with him. DEPRAVED!! WICKED!! (And very effective.) I know that would be a strong incentive for me to follow his directions. Go Lucius!

Such a cute couple. 8-)

Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks

Ch. 7 -- Oh yummy! I look forward to learning more about the sex magic spells Lucius knows.

Wow! That was a cool idea to have Lucius use magic to control when she comes. He's quite the master isn't he? Another hot chapter as usual! Great Job! Please update soon!