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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! decidedly hot! can't wait for the next chapter!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woooo! Nice cliff hanger!! lol AnnaV... definitely an adequate dosage. Can't wait to read more!
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@9. Yays, severus might join!! Awesome chapter, update more soon!!!
*DB*
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. that was HOT as you promised. a threesome with a double pen. she's in for something new.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9: "Nothing I cannot handle." Severus made a PUN. Poor sod. I'm trying to imagine what it would be like to sit in a pastry shop, smelling the aromas, but not getting to taste any. Sheer torture for the Potions Master. I do like his being ready to jump any female. It looks like Hermione is going to become a 'with sandwich' pretty soon.
I don't mind Lucius and Severus just enjoying Hermione and not each other. That will be quite hot enough for my erotic tastes. But I do wonder what it would be like to have Hermione directing the action, making the two bad boys do her bidding. Until they took command and made her subservient again.
Lovely SMOKING chapter!! Thank you!!
I don't mind Lucius and Severus just enjoying Hermione and not each other. That will be quite hot enough for my erotic tastes. But I do wonder what it would be like to have Hermione directing the action, making the two bad boys do her bidding. Until they took command and made her subservient again.
Lovely SMOKING chapter!! Thank you!!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, a Snape/Malfoy sandwich. Where can I order one of those? Hold the mustard, though, that meat would be quite spicy enough... Love it! Keep it coming.
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May 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, the possibility of Severus joining in, hmmm. I like it.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 8 - Poor Lucius didn't get his morning play time! Really looking forward to interaction with these two and SS - can I faint now?
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8: I like the two of them so at ease with each other. It's more like they're a happily married couple than mentor and student of the erotic arts. And Lucius in a shower, his hair growing wet as he bends to wash that particular feminine place so pleasing to both of them. A lovely mind pic. Now tell me, does a mere mentor call his student 'dear heart'? I'm thinking there's a bit more going on here.
Oooh, are you considering having Severus join the party? If so, in what manner? Will he just be another 'lesson' for Hermione? Or will Snape and Lucius go at it as a demonstration for our heroine? I vote for both. Now where do I put my ballot? I can do ballot stuffing in a really interesting spot - one that I suspect Lucius would like, the pervert. No! No! His spot! NOT MINE! 8-)
Nicely done chapter, showing Hermione has a mind as well as a c@#$! (Bad LaBib, bad! bad!)
Oooh, are you considering having Severus join the party? If so, in what manner? Will he just be another 'lesson' for Hermione? Or will Snape and Lucius go at it as a demonstration for our heroine? I vote for both. Now where do I put my ballot? I can do ballot stuffing in a really interesting spot - one that I suspect Lucius would like, the pervert. No! No! His spot! NOT MINE! 8-)
Nicely done chapter, showing Hermione has a mind as well as a c@#$! (Bad LaBib, bad! bad!)