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person Lazart
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just pure evil leaving us hanging like that!!! We might forgive you if you update ASAP!!! PLZ!!!
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12: Ah, well, I see Hermione didn't chicken out. It was a long shot, me taking her place. If they're looking for a fourth, though, keep me in mind.

Hermione and Severus didn't waste any time after Lucius left the room. 8-)

Was MistressMalfoy your beta or did she help with inspiration?

I'm ready to find out if Lucius and Severus can share and just how 'intricate' their threesome gets. Will they each play only with Hermione or will Hermione be the voyeur sometimes as Lucius and Severus enjoy each other?I can't remember if you said there was any slash.

And yes, you are evil and mean. But I'll follow you upstairs into the bedroom as you are promising lemons for a reward.
person JoBob
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! your soooo mean!!!!
PLEASE put out the next one fast! your such a tease! >_< please put up the next one quick! i won't get a chance to check it again for two weeks after tuesday! pleeeeeese!!!!
incase you haven't noticed, i LOVE your story. keep up the good work!!!!
person some1
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG PLEAZ UPDATE!!
person King0X
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the BEST Hermione Lucious stories I've read in quite some time :) You're a GREAT Writer and I hope you update soon :D I'm lookin forward to the lemon grove =D
person Anon
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person DarkLady
schedule June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oi ya big cow! update at GE! :D
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now I eagerly anticipate the next chapter. Write it soon! LOL.
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woo hoo what a set up for the next chapter of
"cocktails".

*smirks*

Please drop me a line when the next chapter will be up.
Very enjoyable story..
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11: So Severus is invited to the feast (of senses) that evening. From chapter 10 we know he's aroused by Hermione's breasts, but my suspicion is that Severus is a true connoisseur of the entire female body, just like his colleague, Lucius. AND the potions master doesn't need a roadmap to all the best female attractions to visit. To my mind Lucius delights in the feminine form indulging both himself and his partner, but Snape prefers to submerge his partner in a sexual haze he controls. I wonder if Lucius and Snape...?

I can see Hermione's quandry. It's quite a jump from one lover to a double dose of sly Slytherins. At least Lucius is allowing his 'pet' the choice.


(Snort) Lucius told Hermione he'd left the door open on their little nooner? He must know her rather well to understand that would make her hotter rather than embarrassing her into refusing the threesome he's promoting. If she backs out at the last minute my cell phone number is XXX-XXXX. Call me day or night (especially night). I am fully qualified to venture into lemon groves, so no worries there.

Just what exactly was Hermione sticking her dress to, so Snape would be titillated? Will we get more description of her gown as Snape looks her over? And what color is her dress - green, I suppose. Those snakes have a one-track mind about their color schemes. Of course both men do seem to favor black as well.

Lovely set-up chapter guiding us toward what we all want to read. Take your time and don't leave a single lick, bite, suck, squeeze, thrust, or nuzzle to the imagination. Okay?

LaBib, the word-slut