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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, and I am sorry to hear of your father's passing. I know it can be tough as I grew up with much loss myself. Anyhow...
I cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm rather interested to see what becomes of the talk Lucius and Severus are going to have. I will admit, the peck on the cheek was rather intriguing. I'm curious to see where it all goes.
Keep up the wonderful work!
I cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm rather interested to see what becomes of the talk Lucius and Severus are going to have. I will admit, the peck on the cheek was rather intriguing. I'm curious to see where it all goes.
Keep up the wonderful work!
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July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very sorry to hear about your Dad.
I just found your story and I'm enjoying it immensely! Excellent smut, delicious characters!
I just found your story and I'm enjoying it immensely! Excellent smut, delicious characters!
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@13 you love to keep us hanging don't you. its cruel. update soon
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CH 13 -- First, I'm sorry about your dad. I lost mine a few years ago, and it just takes time to come to terms. {{empathetic hug}}. And muses - someone gave them the keys to the garden gate and those little buggers run off willy-nilly whenever the notion strikes them! Try changing the locks on the gate and posting a plot bunny as guard -- it sometimes helps. :) Lastly, as to DH -- JKR at least left those of us who adore Severus a window to open and pull him out of. The epilogue was a big disappointment to me!
I adore this story and was excited to see another chapter up tonight. I adore this trio and like the way you have them interact. One bit on constructive criticism for you. Go back to the chapters where Lucius plays with Hermione after dinner and then lays her on the table. The descriptions you used there were wonderful and I felt that passion in your writing was lacking a bit in Chapter 13. (Though I do understand how hard it is to do when real life swoops in and occupies your brain.)
I adore this story and was excited to see another chapter up tonight. I adore this trio and like the way you have them interact. One bit on constructive criticism for you. Go back to the chapters where Lucius plays with Hermione after dinner and then lays her on the table. The descriptions you used there were wonderful and I felt that passion in your writing was lacking a bit in Chapter 13. (Though I do understand how hard it is to do when real life swoops in and occupies your brain.)
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July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How are you doing?
I hope a bit better.
Good chapter.
Thank you.
I hope a bit better.
Good chapter.
Thank you.
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO! You cant stop there!
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so fucking hot and delicious. God, Hermione is one lucky witch. Lucius is so bloody gorgeous and sexy. Even better, Snape is now involved. Please don't leave it too long for the next chapter. Wow, have to go *calm down* now! hee hee!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@12. *GLARES* what?! Why?! *whimpers* how could you tease like that?! The next chapter better be updated soon!!! Very very very soon!!!!!! You are so evil leaving it there!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i just read the whole thing in like 30 mins and i love it its great please update soon
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAAUUUUUUGGGHHHH!! It was just getting good. I actually lost this story, thank goodness I found it, although maybe I should have waited another couple of days, it's like getting all worked up with no climax....ah, but the feast was nice.
Keep up the hot work! *shew*
Keep up the hot work! *shew*