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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...that was nice! I just love all the smut! I'm looking forward to your next chapters! I am dying to know more background information about how Lucius and Hermione got together. How did he originally master her? I mean, I know it's Lucius and all, but I can't help but think she must have originally put up at least a little bit of a fight. It's just not everyday you become a sex slave to a Death Eater! lol XD
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Such lovely smut! Ron hadn't a clue, but I do think if Hermione was so dissatisfied she could have mentioned it before she decided to leave him. He thought she was having a good time and apparently with his lack of experience, he didn't know any better. Well the pensieve should take care of that, but it was still a bit cruel to send him the explicit thoughts of the woman he loved getting off with someone else. I'm not Ron's champion, but fair's fair.
So far it looks like Lucius and Hermione are very compatible in the sack (and everywhere else, it seems) and if this is going to just be a smut-a-rama, I have no objections whatsoever. None!
If the story becomes more than it started out to be - and that happens quite a bit - I hope those two develop some sort of interpersonal relationship beyond the carnal. They're both very intelligent characters, so there's plenty of material waiting to happen.
Did I mention I don't care if it isn't anything more than wall-to-wall smut? Oh, yeah... 8-)
So far it looks like Lucius and Hermione are very compatible in the sack (and everywhere else, it seems) and if this is going to just be a smut-a-rama, I have no objections whatsoever. None!
If the story becomes more than it started out to be - and that happens quite a bit - I hope those two develop some sort of interpersonal relationship beyond the carnal. They're both very intelligent characters, so there's plenty of material waiting to happen.
Did I mention I don't care if it isn't anything more than wall-to-wall smut? Oh, yeah... 8-)
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o
Wew. That's all. Wew. That's good, btw. Wait, lemme try it again.
WEW!!
XD
Wew. That's all. Wew. That's good, btw. Wait, lemme try it again.
WEW!!
XD
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@2. who cares why they got together, they did and its an awesome story!!!!! Update update!!!!!!
*DB*
*DB*
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow..if this is the gutter of your mind, you should set up boat tour
LOVED the note and attachment to Ron! lolololol..
LOVED the note and attachment to Ron! lolololol..
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How often are you planning to update? Your story is really good and I want to read more soon.
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March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
he is right, get on with it already! well i will be waiting for the next update! :)
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: Interesting beginning. It's pretty obvious what motives and reasons Lucius has for keeping Hermione as his 'pet'. I'd be interested in knowing more about why Hermione seems so serene about her role in Malfoy Manor. Bewitched? Slave? Just likes to wander around nude for the possibility of a grope? (Okay, if Lucius is involved, I can kind of see her point on the groping issue..) 8-)
And you got rid of Narcissa. Extra points right there!
The smut was nicely done. I'm always happy to read about Lucius' sexploits. More please?
And you got rid of Narcissa. Extra points right there!
The smut was nicely done. I'm always happy to read about Lucius' sexploits. More please?