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Sooo need chapter 68! I still think Ginny used a love potion on Harry! But I agree. Everyone would be numb.

wow......this chapter was soo....like you said numb...I had a wave of depresse just come over me when I read this. I can really feel out for each and every one of the characters in here. It must be hard to lose someone they all cared for dearly. It must be hard an all of them. The regrete and the guilt they all must feel. Its all soooo...ANGST...Thats the word I was looking for.

Har Har...Ginny...>> Oh I agree with you but I still hate her. >>

wow I still cant believe its ending..just wow... I mean I really hope that JK's version of book 7 will be good. and if not theres always yours xD. Still about 5 or more...oh dear that is coming to a end quick...so the story will mroe then likey be done by the end of this week if not next week. I will re-read you fanfic again and again....and your newer ones. Also will Harry and Draco....(if they make it out of here alive)get married?...oh wait that would be something you cant tell us right?....oh poo. OH!!! and will Harry ever find out about Draco's Journal?I am just wonderings...And where does Draco have the time to write about this...nevermine..ingore that last question. But yea will Harry ever know about Draco's Journal? Still thou....


I hope you write more after wards and cant wait intill next chapter. ^^

This story is somewhat confusing at times but i think a lot of what yu siad makes since and some of it could possibly happen in the 7th book. Probably not the one thing i want to happen, but some of it could. Great job on portraying the emotions through your writing. I feel as though i can feel everything the characters are feeling and it takes a lot for a story to do that to me usually. Can't wait for the next chapter.

The Snidget was the orgianl bird that was used in Quidditch when the game was first invented, then later changed to the snitch because the birds i think became extinct with such over usage for the game.

.......GAH! I knew you would pull a fast one on us!! BUT who put Ginny under the curse!HA! *ponders* This chapter really went to the heart you know? I mean no Neville was never one of my fav characters but he did diserve what you gave him...I also really wnat to see Bellirtx get whats coming to her! HAHA KARMAS A BITCH EH!?>D AND OMG WHEN NOTT WAS THERE! I WAS LIKE....*whisper to Draco as god would do*"KILL HIM....KILL HIM" >3 I see that came true!...for a second there I was like oh no!!Notts back! Run Draco!RUN!!BEFORE HE RAPES YOU AGAIN! You gave me a heart attack almost.I said almost. I do have to say thou...that battle...wow.I had to re-read it a couple times beacuse I kept jumping a head and not reading what was in front of me. 8D

SNAPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEE.SNAPE.....GAH SNAPE!!O.o....I am weird. Woot! I just loved how tonk was hidding amoung the Death-Eatters. xD

Poor Harry...He needs Draco to be there so he doesnt go insane....Ha..Harry insane. But really poor Harry....T_T I still love you even if you killed Neville.^^ I cant wait for more.

*sniff* That was so sad. I love Neville so much, and it was horrible to see him die. But I completely understand your reasons for doing this, and I agree. I think he doesn't get as much attention in the books as he deserves, that's why I was so grateful for you while reading the last couple of chapters. You managed to describe him with love and sympathy (something I don't quite feel in the books) even through Draco's eyes. And although I hate it when people say "at least he died as a hero", here it does make a difference. Not for us, who mourn his death, but for him. He needed this revenge on Bellatrix (and everybody who ever thought he was useless, and let's face it, there were quite a few who thought that), just like you said, it was his choice. Thank you for making me angry at him and proud of him at the same time.
But I was almost dancing when Draco killed Nott, that bastard deserved to die painfully, thank you!!
BTW, my favourite sentence was: "The damn bitch had gone and gotten herself put under the Imperius Curse." That was so Draco, I really loved it. It must have been really hard to write this, I mean there was so much you had to pay attention to, so much going on at the same time. But I think you did great!
Oh, I love this story so much, I don't know what I'll do once it's over - I think I'll read it over and over again!!! :D

You know, for one that read slowly and carefully, you are really hardworking, as you are making me to keep up too! Actually this is for ch.64...

For Ginny, I would guess that memories would be polyjuiced potion work, as she is wicked and cunning, and has so many lovers/fuck buddies, she can easily persuade others to polyjuice in Harry...if not, then she is always dreaming, and that started very very young....kind of...feeling she is really a whore...

For the death of order members and others, well, there can be two assumptions. Either it was released by Kingsley, or there is a spy inside the order. For one, I would guess that spy is Ginny. I just hate her so much in this series...

Maybe Harry needs to think of one way to calm Draco down, as well as his own...

OMG... Neville is died... He really died a hero... But he is dead never the less...
Still can't believe, he is gone, dead, never to return, passed on, but he died a hero, on his own terms, like you said

i am crying....lots of tears rolling down my cheeks. you are right though if he is to die it would be a hero's death. i for one did not want him sharing a room with his parents.


sorry i haven't been reviewing lately... so just to let you know i am still with you on this journey and as always keep up the excellent work.

Sorry again for the double review. This is my condensed comment for chapters 65 ad 66.

Review: Chapter 65
You played up the first ten paragraphs pretty well. You successfully showed the fear of the inevitable in Harry's character.

Regarding the action sequence, it IS disturbing that most, if not all, the orphans were turned into Inferi. But then you reflected what war is clearly. It just shows how no one is safe in a war, that everyone, including innocent children, are used and abused by those in power just so they can successfully carry out their plan. And I have to agree, using children as mere tools is a very Voldemort thing to do.

In a way this little concept becomes an eye-opener. Despite this being set in a fantasy, it reflects what is happening in our world, most especially in war zones.

Okay, back to the story....

Now, I wonder why no adult went in with them. Why are the minors the only ones who entered the orphanage?


Review: Chapter 66
Wow. All I can say is, Ginny's so weak.

Despite the earlier warnings regarding her weaknesses, she still fell under one - and under the Imperius Curse to boot! So unfortunate.

I love the battle scene. I could almost smell chaos and fear while I was reading it a while ago.

And...NEVILLE DIED? OMG 0_0 NO, YOU DIDN'T!!! OH I COULDN'T BELIEVE IT!!!!

*sniff* This is so tragic! But then there's no choice, is it? You really have to kill him in order to bring out the hero in him.

When I read Harry's woe, I can almost feel his pain. I nearly cried! It's really hard to lose a friend in a senseless battle.

Harry must be blaming himself for Neville's death. He must have felt that he wasn't strong enough, that his efforts fell short. Oh...the mental torture and pressure heightens! I feel sorry for him.


Can't wait for chapter 67. I just can't!!!! I have to know how the Order will face another loss.


---reiche