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made a typo on last comment. i meant to say 72 not 73. :p

Great chapter. A little depressing but it was good. I guess I could kind of see how Draco would feel for Harry having sex with him and bringing back those horrible memories, that nearly brought tears to my eyes, reading Draco freaking out like that. Will there be a chapter when they have sex but call it making love instead of the other way around? Just asking, I really liked both Harry and Draco saying there 'I love yous' that was so sweet. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Soooo need chapter 72! Poor Draco! He just needs time! This is it! Oh I'm sooo worried for them all!

I know I am still behind but I just had to say that I think you did an amazing job in how Neville had to die... I will admit that I do not like the idea that he is gone as far as your story goes. However, the way in which he had to go made me cry (lame... I know...). Then when I read the author's note I smiled to myself a bit... He really was a hero and he always will be in the eyes of many HP fans. At least the one's that read your work. <3

*hugs Draco* Honestly, I did expect a similar reaction, I was hoping for it, actually - no, not because I'm evil and want to hurt my Draco, but because I think it's simply unrealistic to believe that anybody could just forget something as horrible as rape. *hugs Draco* I know last time I said I'm not very much afraid of your ending because I trust you, and it's true, I do, but now that the end is so close I can't help but fear for them - all of them. I don't want any more deaths. Until now I thought I wouldn't mind if Ginny died, I don't care about her, but now I'm even afraid for her (I'm crazy, I know). And PLEASE, PLEASE don't kill Luna, PLEASE. And PLEASE take care of Draco, PLEASE!!!! I know I'm begging but I don't care. *hugs Draco* Er, I think I should stop hugging Draco because a very upset Harry is watching me from the corner and I'm not sure I want to have his rage directed at me, thank you very much. Shit, he's coming closer... Harry, calm down, look, I... I just... there's no need to be jealous, Draco loves you... and anyway, Draco and a GIRL!!! Come on, be reasonable - but maybe that's just too much to ask from a Gryffindor... ups, wrong thing to say... RUUUUUUUUUN!!!! :D

omg where do i begin to tell you how much i adore this story. this chapter had me in tears.the way you describe everything in this story is just excellent. i really wunna see more fictions written from you. sorry i didn't review before but i wasn't a member tell now so i'm really happy i'm reviewing now ^-^

ahh can't wait for ch 73!

Sorry...as I need to hand in 2 reports and 1 proposal by the end of this week, I am unable to read...argh...but I promised I will come back once I clear all of my work~~~~ keep this on, please don't give up!

And here is the problem with being all caught up with a WIP... cliffies. *sigh* Although I think that I don't mind the cliffies so much with your story. They just make me anxiously await the next chapter. =3

I don't understand why you are always so insecure about your writing. That's precisly what it is...YOUR writing. If people don't like where you are going in your plot then tell them to piss off and go read something else. You shouldn't feel worried anyway. Your writing style and all other things are magnificent. I haven't found one thing in your story that is wrongly placed or that I didn't like just because it was glarlingly bad. The deaths suck but sadly as you stated in your Author's Notes...they are needed.

Anyway, (I've realized I am rambling... again) can't wait for the next chapter. <3

~NekoMamimi

Another combined review coming up! I promise, this will be a little shorter than the other double reviews.

Okay, on with the show!

Review: Chapter 69

Goodie! More factoids about the Deathly Hallows and magic!

I have no idea why McGonagall is so fussed with the Deathly Hallows revelation. But, I have to admit, her little argument with Dumbledore was fun to read. I can imagine the members of the Order swimming in confusion as the two headmasters babbled away.

Well, well...what an intricate plan Voldemort weaved. And, Stonehenge? I liked that bit. Stonehenge is one of my most favorite mysterious places in the world. Your explanation makes sense.

And...Dumbledore's brother appears! Wow. More people coming in for some more hodgepodge.

I have a question though. When you meant Augustus Rookwood's former partner, do you mean a normal work partner, or is there something more to this?


Review: Chapter 70

All I have to say is, poor goat. How unfortunate for a creature to be turned into a labrat. But it can't be helped. There's no way to know the possibilities of Apparition inside the Deathly Hallows without consorting to a test subject.

I wonder whose soul Aberforth attached to the goat, though.

Ahh, and Luna managed to crack up the awful silence with her killer questions.

Hmm, so Blood Magic and Soul Magic are needed in the process. Draco must really feel uncomfortable with that idea. There are just too many unpleasant memories attached with those two.

I feel so sorry for Harry. He must feel the pressure mounting.