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April 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this on y!Gallery, and when I saw extra chapters, I jumped on it! I love how you write Draco's POV; I laughed at his frustration on the pimples thing. More soon, please! EM
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...so I am starting to wonder how they come together, if at all. BUT I STILL LOVE IT! I mean will Draco always write of his wanking? LOL Anyways...please keep it going, I love it!
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April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RAWR! If I were Draco, Harry wouldn't have me pinned, I would have jumped him! hahaha He would have been so buggered by now, LOL I am so bad, LOL I am glad you like wanking...:P I prefer to use the euphamism wanking to masturbating anyday, LOL I has such a cooler ring to it :P I am bad I can't wait for more I am loving it!
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April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok first off I have to say that this is one of the best fics I have read in a long time. I can never wait for the next chapter to come out. Everything that you write is totally believable. I have one question to ask you... you listed D/s in the warnings part, and I was wonderig who you planned on making a dominant in this story. Would you let me know, pretty please!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo can't wait for chapter 12! I love this insight into his mind!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 11:
awsome chapter (of course). i love the way he writes. all of emotions, beliefs and denile... bloody brilliant. i cant wait for more
i can totally see the tone of his journal entries becomimg more and more desperate and frantic after he realises his feelings and gets together with harry. especially when he has to deal with what is to become of him.
excellent job, cheers!
awsome chapter (of course). i love the way he writes. all of emotions, beliefs and denile... bloody brilliant. i cant wait for more
i can totally see the tone of his journal entries becomimg more and more desperate and frantic after he realises his feelings and gets together with harry. especially when he has to deal with what is to become of him.
excellent job, cheers!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I must say I am anxious to see boook 5 and six written through Draco's eyes...Especially after Secumsempra. heh
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good luck on your exams! I can't wait for chapter 11!
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, you're fast! Every time I check, there are three new chapters to read! Not that I'm complaining, mind. *grins*
Chapter 8
Well, I intended to start this review telling you what I enjoyed most about this chapter. But there's a porblem: can't decide whether I liked Draco sleeping on his stomach to avoid embarrassment best (just the idea of Draco having this kind of dream with all of Hgwarts around had me grinning) or his little tantrum about Weasley throwing potions ingredients at him. Very sweet, how he was watching Harry while they all slept in the Great Hall. And his comment to Dumbledore's protection scheme! *giggles* Very Draco. Only seeing the obvious. As though Dumbledore didn't have more security measurements taken when he made all students sleep together. But perceptive fpr a thirteen-year-old.
Oh, and I think his boredom when Pansy is around, or in general when he's with the Slytherins just delicious! It's like he's only coming to life when a certain someone is around, isn't he? And, of course, he not comparing Pansy to Harry to the former's disadvantage. *giggles* I love slips like that!
But no dreams this chapter. Maybe more next chappie? So looking forward to reading more of those!
Chapter 8
Well, I intended to start this review telling you what I enjoyed most about this chapter. But there's a porblem: can't decide whether I liked Draco sleeping on his stomach to avoid embarrassment best (just the idea of Draco having this kind of dream with all of Hgwarts around had me grinning) or his little tantrum about Weasley throwing potions ingredients at him. Very sweet, how he was watching Harry while they all slept in the Great Hall. And his comment to Dumbledore's protection scheme! *giggles* Very Draco. Only seeing the obvious. As though Dumbledore didn't have more security measurements taken when he made all students sleep together. But perceptive fpr a thirteen-year-old.
Oh, and I think his boredom when Pansy is around, or in general when he's with the Slytherins just delicious! It's like he's only coming to life when a certain someone is around, isn't he? And, of course, he not comparing Pansy to Harry to the former's disadvantage. *giggles* I love slips like that!
But no dreams this chapter. Maybe more next chappie? So looking forward to reading more of those!
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9
Oh, a dream! Yummy. ^-^ Poor Draco. The tension! And it's only Harry in boxers. Harry in only boxers. Whatever. And that before the match against Gryffindor. Now, what does that tell us? It tells us to get the alarm clock to wake Draco up. Though he's very funny, consciously oblivious (because his subconscious so knows!).
A very Quidditch-filled chapter. Filled with absolutely lovely parts, too. Like this one:
'The Firebolt was moving so smoothly through the air and god did he look good on it.
Oh, a dream! Yummy. ^-^ Poor Draco. The tension! And it's only Harry in boxers. Harry in only boxers. Whatever. And that before the match against Gryffindor. Now, what does that tell us? It tells us to get the alarm clock to wake Draco up. Though he's very funny, consciously oblivious (because his subconscious so knows!).
A very Quidditch-filled chapter. Filled with absolutely lovely parts, too. Like this one:
'The Firebolt was moving so smoothly through the air and god did he look good on it.