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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im crying bc they died and for draco that sucks ass bc everyone wants to see them together in the end LIVING.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sobs madly* Oh gods that was so well done! I don't want Draco to be dead... they have to find him. Poor Harry! God he was so distraught! I can't beleive this is over in one more chapter! This has been such a journey, I can't see it ending horribly - and Snape - I hoped Snape would be good in the end! I am glad he died protecting Draco! :) Even if Draco died, his life gave Harry strenght and that is what is important I guess. I don't want this to be over!!!!! Gah! I need more! :) *huggles and love*
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just love this story. Draco can't be dead. Harry and Draco need to be together forever. So he can't be gone. Anyways, can't wait for the last chapter. Wow, 72 chapters, I have never read a book or an online story that had that many chapters.
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Where's Draco?!
How could you?!
T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T
The epilogue had better bring resolution, or I will cry!
Where's Draco?!
How could you?!
T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T Y_Y T_T
The epilogue had better bring resolution, or I will cry!
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I never reviewed before (I had no account, sorry), but I have to do now.
Your story is absolutely brilliant. I loved it from the first few chapters on, and this last chapter, especially the ending gave me goose-bumps!
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Your story is absolutely brilliant. I loved it from the first few chapters on, and this last chapter, especially the ending gave me goose-bumps!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...after finishing all and begin with another hell of work (yes, another whole week away...), here are my reviews...
Have you seen the newest film? Neville has grown and truly being a Longbottom...like you described, he was never clever, was never quick enough, but he was patient and kind and persisitent...he was another war victim...such way of dying did suit him best! And his action did done great harm on Bellatrix...as she praised the lord higher than others, failing him would be such a disgrace, and being stopped by a longbottom...what a trick!
And what did Dumbledore has to say? Actually he left a question behind in book 6, and that has stimulated much much argument of real death....but really, Draco's response to red is really interesting!
But for the assumption of deathly hallows, it just seems...too queer and too horrible to consider. It is a good way to plan and act...however, this makes me feel that...if ever we want something from these hallows, what is the catch then? Sure again this is a matter of give and take, then what is it involved? Life? Soul?...soul is the most precious gift that has given to us, losing it, abusing it and destroying it indeed consider the worst kind of crime one can commit...
Have you seen the newest film? Neville has grown and truly being a Longbottom...like you described, he was never clever, was never quick enough, but he was patient and kind and persisitent...he was another war victim...such way of dying did suit him best! And his action did done great harm on Bellatrix...as she praised the lord higher than others, failing him would be such a disgrace, and being stopped by a longbottom...what a trick!
And what did Dumbledore has to say? Actually he left a question behind in book 6, and that has stimulated much much argument of real death....but really, Draco's response to red is really interesting!
But for the assumption of deathly hallows, it just seems...too queer and too horrible to consider. It is a good way to plan and act...however, this makes me feel that...if ever we want something from these hallows, what is the catch then? Sure again this is a matter of give and take, then what is it involved? Life? Soul?...soul is the most precious gift that has given to us, losing it, abusing it and destroying it indeed consider the worst kind of crime one can commit...
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...really and finally reaching the finale, with 72 or more chapters, what an accomplishment! And goind to the land of dead to kill...another intrigue and amazing arrangement. However, if indeed it is a land of dead, will the soul be able to help? There must be so many of them, will the souls and loved ones help to kill Voldermort? Act as a distraction? And for the spell, if no AK is used, other than by hands/weapons, what other options would you offer? And would Draco be able to...come back?
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo Sorry I havent comment in a while.. v.v I have been very busy. I am a busy little girl you know. xD Any ways..I cant seem to remember much of the other two chapter I have read..* relaly just got back from seeing Harry Potter Order of the Pheonix here at midnight* All I am can say it is falling out really nicly for you. I mean you give us enough info to lead us on but yet still keep us guessing. <3 you for that. I think some day you will be a great writer..Or I would hope that I could read a book of yours. ^^ I wonder what Dumbldor warned Draco about? I really want to see how you make the Deathly Hollows work out and how they get from there to here..and of course the final battle...hehehe...Either way I know I will be happy with your ending. ^^...POOR DRACO...I guess that is the trama of being Rape..Thou I hope Draco will someday get pass it...Lucky Harry is there.^^ I would write mroe but I need sleep....eh....Keep going!
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Daft Fear!
I was able to sneak up in the computer room so I was able to send this sole review for chapter 71. But despite this being a one-chapter review, I am afraid this will be as long as the two-chapter reviews I gave you before. Just so it wouldn't be as confusing and cramped for you, I divided it into sections: one review for every date written on this chapter.
I apologize for the trouble.
Okay, on with the show. Yahoo!
Review: Chapter 71
March 28
I really loved how you focused the first part of the chapter on Draco's reflections on war and the ensuing 'battle royale,' as well as the side characters' emotions. I especially liked the part where Ginny was listening to Luna about "a complex conspiracy theory dealing with Vampires in the Ministry." It was a 180
I was able to sneak up in the computer room so I was able to send this sole review for chapter 71. But despite this being a one-chapter review, I am afraid this will be as long as the two-chapter reviews I gave you before. Just so it wouldn't be as confusing and cramped for you, I divided it into sections: one review for every date written on this chapter.
I apologize for the trouble.
Okay, on with the show. Yahoo!
Review: Chapter 71
March 28
I really loved how you focused the first part of the chapter on Draco's reflections on war and the ensuing 'battle royale,' as well as the side characters' emotions. I especially liked the part where Ginny was listening to Luna about "a complex conspiracy theory dealing with Vampires in the Ministry." It was a 180
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July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really is finishing :( but i did know this was coming
oh yeah #will we still get to see malfoy manor or was there not a right time in the story
and just wondering have you read the fic checkmate by naadi ?(i don't think it's on aff)
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oh yeah #will we still get to see malfoy manor or was there not a right time in the story
and just wondering have you read the fic checkmate by naadi ?(i don't think it's on aff)
x x x x x x