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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god... sorry... I... I'm... I'm crying... I... sorry, I need to... I need to calm down. You did it. I can't believe you could do it. I thought nobody could do it but you did... I... I'm still in shock. You managed to... no I still can't write... I'll write another review when I'm not choking on my tears anymore... sorry (BTW I've just read all the chapters up to chapter 26 in one go... I guess that sort of explains my reaction...)
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Daft Fear, What can I say
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:] thanks for answering my question
and great chapter
have fun in london and paris ... you can come visit me haha
xxxxxx
and great chapter
have fun in london and paris ... you can come visit me haha
xxxxxx
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm working more or less properly again. At least I've stopped crying and my heart isn't pounding furiously anymore. Luckily I've realized that HP and the Philosopher's Stone is shown on one of the HUngarian channels today so I've watched a bit and seeing my baby Draco being 11 and happy and cute and slightly arrogant made me feel a bit better. I really needed that, while reading your story I suffered more than I could ever have imagined to suffer from a story... I know this doesn't sound like a praise but believe me, it is. I ADORE this, it is the BEST novel-length story I've ever read on this page!!! Not kidding! And don't you dare worry about the pace, it's fantastic!!! It's just the right amound of detail, I think it would be less powerful if you rushed into the DRaco-Harry stuff, this way we sort of feel some of the tension DRaco feels. Speaking of which... DAMN YOU FOR MAKING ME GO THROUGH ALL THIS!!! These imotions... BLOODY HELL!!!! And I thought I'm cruel to my readers by making them suffer with Draco, but compared to this one my stories are like bedtime stories - and believe me that says something. It was amazing how you could find all the right words to express Draco's feelings and how you could match them to what was happening in the books. I didn't even realize it and I was already at book 6. I simply forgot everything around me and could think of nothing else but the pain Draco had to go through. It hurt so much to watch him getting closer and closer to his inevitable fate and DAMN YOu POTTER FOR BEING SO FUCKING OBLIVIOUS!!!! (sorry, I've never been a great fan of Harry and your story isn't really a big help in dealing with my Potter-phobia) The way Harry acted after the kiss... THEIR FIRST KISS!!!!!! I wanted to slap him, kick him and give him to Voldemort as a CHristmas present... or just make him realize what a stupid ass he is. And the turning-into-ferret thingie, GOD, that was so painful, I wanted to rip Potter's still beating heart out of his chest... BTW, I love how you can show the way DRaco is maturing through the years just by letting us hear his voice!!! And I must tell you I was really afraid when I got to book 6, because I haven't read it only 2 chapters from the end, and I didn't really know what to expect. And all that with Voldemort, and DRaco's task and... and then chapter 26... that was too much, up to that point I was trying to stay strong but that dream and then that ending... I just couldn't help it, I couldn't hold my tears back. It was just too much, too much pain and angst... and this realization hit me like a Bludger... I THOUGHT THAT THE ANGST WAS TOO MUCH?????? OH MY GOD!!! THIS IS THE END OF THE WORLD!!! I'm practically living on angst!!! It's my water and air, without a good amount of angst I can't even enjoy a hot sex scene between the guys!!!! I'M OBSESSED with angst! The combination TOO MUCH ANGST doesn't exist in my world!!!! And now you come with your chapter 26 and destroy everything I've ever believed in!!! I didn't know what to think, I was confused and couldn't decide whether I liked you for doing this to me or not... By now I've decided that I LOVE you for making me feel like shit (especially because in moments like this I get the best story ideas :D)! But I'm still not sure whether I can face chapter 27 today... *shrugs* Keep on writing so much angst, keep on making me feel like after a friendly chat with Voldemort, keep on making me unable to breath from pain - YOU'RE FANTASTIC, I LOVE YOU'RE WORK!!!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I felt sorry for Draco sometimes, especially with the ferret incident since I've never really thought of it like that... but OMG he's self-absorbed. he really thinks he's the center of the universe huh? no empathy! he really doesn't understand why what he does makes Harry hate him... o.O I thought that when he himself met Voldie he would at least begin to understand what Harry has been going through but...
can't wait to see the attack from his POV... and what happens when he learns that Snape really did take the Vow (he will find out right?)
you did make a few changes mistakes from the books... I wanted to ask if that was for the plot or...
I took Crabbe and Goyle back to the common-room but something strange hit me. They looked odd
can't wait to see the attack from his POV... and what happens when he learns that Snape really did take the Vow (he will find out right?)
you did make a few changes mistakes from the books... I wanted to ask if that was for the plot or...
I took Crabbe and Goyle back to the common-room but something strange hit me. They looked odd
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit... I knew it was a bad idea to read chapter 27 today... but I couldn't help it... I just had to go on. And now I'm in tears again because the two parts that I've feared the most were in this chapter: the Sectumsempra chapter and some bad bad Ginny stuff, and I'm still not sure if I'll live to see how this story ends. Oh, DRaco... *sobs* Ok, I think I need to write something tragic to be able to deal with these feeling right now! (Thank you for this wonderful story BTW)
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was good and sad, because of what Nott did to Draco. But when will Draco make a move on Harry. I want them together. Anyways can't wait for the next chapter.
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOw that was intense but I don't feel it was entirely far fetched. Its your story, take it as far as the eye can see! I love it though and it makes me feel so bad for Draco because I am guessing that the Sectumsempra incident is coming next :/ OH NO! Poor Draco being Raped by Nott! That bastard!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco! How horrifying! Sooo need chapter 27!
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco! I like the added touch, I hope to see more! I mean, I don't like that he got raped, especially by Teddy Nott, ugh! But you know what I mean, right? I can't wait to see what you have in store next!