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Daft Fear, I was just about to review chapter 34 when I saw a another email update for chapter 35. Whoa!! You sure are going to make a lot of readers very happy and then very frustrated. A double Cliffhanger!!!! Now wait just a dam minute, you can

Wow, personally I like how this came out, I thought it was pretty intense. If this is how you normally write your diary, I'm jealous! Growing up, I had a caring, but nosey Mom, and now that I'm married, I can't exactly write how I want to either...it has to be vague, because of the one time he did read it, and got pissed. I think it's nice to be able to write out what's on your mind, if you've no one else to talk to. Now....I hope you update soon! EM

i'm back to review again!

regarding chapter 34, it was a good thing you situated the shouting match after the "passing of the locket". they're really bound to have that verbal fight anyway, and i really liked the confusion both parties are in being the spark to "light the fire" (fires of anger, or passion? or both?) very nice touch there, mate!

from my previous review, i was actually thinking that the next chapter would (finally) have the good ol' sex...or some snogging, at the very least. but after that, i suddenly have the hunch that you would cut it short. i was actually thinking of the scenario already: just when draco pushed harry up the wall, ron or hermione (or both?) would suddenly come in to destroy the whole romantic scene...

well, that's just my hunch dear...

heheh, i think i'm not making much sense anymore...


anyway, keep posting! i just love reading your fic! it makes my heart all a-flutter!

take care of yourself, okay? ja!


---reiche

PS: by the way, i am about to piss my pants in anticipation! :D can't wait to read the next chapter!

...is blood lost enough for energy and emotions outbrust? Or has just Draco for being kept and lonely and isolated so long?...hum...seems like being a 17 hormonal driven crazy boy with your crush directly 'looking' at you...being a very difficult subject...

However, this may only put you and Harry back to where it should be - where should friendship begin!

That was wonderful! Perfect! I do believe you are being to hard on yourself.... although cliffies do always cause a painful strain in my chest... perhaps they should've made out before he ended the chapter? :-)

argh! another cliffhanger
a can't decide wether i love them or hate them . oh well
keep the chapters coming
xxxxx

What the hell are you saying? I love it! I think there were some things that the both of them really needed to get off their chests and after fighting there

Sooo need chapte 36! How long had Harry been sitting there? What did he hear? Oh I gotta have more!

I love this chapter. They finally kissed longer, too bad Harry can't get a clue about Draco's feelings towards him. Can't wait for the next chapter.

OMG Draco waking up to Harry beside him in bed was just, GUH, brilliant!!!!! And so hot to boot!!!! OMG! LOL Wow, I so can't wait for more!