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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person murderaid
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh you finished ^-^
must say one of the best fanfictons i've ever read. first story that ever had me in tears.
hope to see more from you!
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it so much and it was a great read and hope you write a follow-up.
person sunset20
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No... you couldn't have... I... You... Please NO!! Sorry, I'm panicking. I haven't read it yet, but... but... where's Draco!!!... tell me you didn't do it!!! *Ok, calm down, breathe, breathe* Sorry, I'll try not to lose my nerves again. Ok, on to the chapter. I'll try to comment on it while reading but most probably I'll fail spectacularly because I won't be able to stop reading, but anyway...

Shit, shit, shit... that doesn't sound good! The way he talks about Draco... I'm scared. *hugs Draco*

That was beautiful, the way the door was unlocked. BTW, it's so strange to read Harry's POV, I'm so used to Draco by now. And to be honest, I miss him. I miss the way he talks. That strange mixure of uncertainty and confidence. *hugs DRaco*

No I don't think she's right. I think Draco as James, Harry as Lily and the rest I don't know.But, wait, why "only girl"? Where's Ginny and Luna? Have I missed something? Because I think Luna could be Rookwood, I mean being a RAVENclaw, right? Anyway... I should be reading, not guessing. It's probably that I don't want to go on, I don't want to know what happened to DRaco.

See, I was at least partially right :D The small joys of life...

*hugs Draco* I do that a lot, I know, but I just have to make sure he's there. I don't want to lose him! I'm pathetic...

Am I mad for still believing in the innocence of Severus? Probably...

HE DID IT!!!! DRACO DID IT!!!! FINALLY, she's dead!!! Bellatrix is dead!!!

SHIIIIIIIIT!!!!!!! Couldn't they have done something? I mean there has to be a way to block his reaction to Parseltongue, right???... He did it!! Oh Draco!!!! *hugs Draco - no I won't let him go!!!*

YESSSSSSS! *happy dance* I knew I could trust him!!!!! HA!!!! NOOOOOOOOO! Severus *sniff* no... NONONONONO Remus... no... (BTW aaawwww that was sweet, finally together with Sirius)

I... I... I don't know what to say, sorry, I... no I can't... I have to calm down first... I... It was great, well written, everything, I just... sorry I can't form whole sentences... Maybe tomorrow... Am I mad to still trust you? Maybe... But I trusted Severus too when all evidence was against him, so I'll trust you too. Please... *sobs*



schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was just so..beyond words.

more tears are flowing.
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seriously?!?!? I'm going on vacation and won't be back until the 23rd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't believe I'm going to have to wait that long! Ugh.

(but awesome story! One of my all time favorites!!)

And just 'cuz I'm going to be gone, I'm going to guess what's going to happen... Draco's in the vault that is his and Harry's only. Right? Right. Ok. Now I can wait 9 days..................... =o) Also, I thought Luna died in the Deathly Hollows???
person murderaid
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have you seen what you've done to me? loll
i'm sitting here in tears, oh god i hope draco is not dead. poor harry i can't stop crying
person sunset20
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(7 hours, a library visit and about 1 litre of Ice Tea later) Now that I've had time to calm down, I just wanted to tell you that your last chapter was amazing, not that I'm surprised. I can't imagine how difficult it must have been to keep everything together! I loved it! I can't wait for the Epilogue, and I'm full of hope for a happy ending. :D
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say. As the end to a war I knew that you would have to have a lot of the characters die. I just hope that in the epilogue you have Draco found. PLEASE!

I am very saddened by the fact that this story is at it's end. You have done a wonderful job and I just can't express how much I really enjoyed reading your work. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this story.

~NekoMamimi
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh.my.god
i'm going away tomrrow early
argh i will try and get on early to read this but ...
argh i can't cope with a week of knowing the end!!

that was absolutley brilliant though. actually cried when remus died and at the end ...

you haven't really killed draco have you ???

and if i can't review again before deathly hallows I'd just like to say this is one of the best fictions I've ever read and I'm just worried now as the real one is coming so soon and eep.
i think we should all probably stock up on tissues

wow. longest comment i have ever left i think

anywayyyyy
good luck for deathly hallows
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schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have never in my life cried when I've read a fanfic.
Not once, not several times.

Nor have I read anything beyond 20chapters.

I do hope you continue writing more stories.

You have a gift.
Sincerely....this touched my heart.

I love Draco, and not only did you make him believable, you made him Draco.
Thank you.

Thank you for writing this.
<3