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by Angelsfear

person Selera
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Thats all I have to say.. WOW!
person graballz
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 39--YES another update! I am abnormally excited every time I see another chapter from you. :D That's a good sign! I just want you to know that I completely get what you're doing and I think it is SO believable! I agree with everything you've done so far, and I love the way it's turning out.

Awwww, I love that Draco is talking to himself! YAY! GO RON! I could just hug you right now! (well, actually, I'd rather hug Draco!) AND YAY DRACO DIDN'T SNARK BACK! GOOD BOY! This is just TOO perfect! I love it!

hahahahahahahaha Draco locked away with Gryffindors...well, I can think of ONE Gryffindor who belongs in a closet...locked...so that hot gay teen sex can occur! (and we all know it WOULD!)

GRRRRRRRR I WANT TO FUCKING KILL LUCIUS! EVERY GODDAMN TIME! BASTARD! Yay for them trusting Draco! And of COURSE he'd be able to help! Smart blonde, that one! *sigh* Once a cockroach, always a cockroach. Although TECHNICALLY it wasn't mean, but c'mon, Draco, you know better than to insult Granger's brains!

*giggle* Harry CAN be daft! I LOVE IT! It's funny cuz it's true! Oh wow...the blood magic, the soul magic HOW DO YOU COME UP WITH STUFF LIKE THIS???? In a million years, I NEVER would've thought of ANYTHING like this! You're amazing!

HAHAHAHAHAHA Hermione growled at Harry "in favor of" Draco! That's priceless! OH GOD THIS IS SO FUCKING PERFECT I CAN'T STAND IT!!!!! *jumping up and down* Seriously!

*GASP* They're arguing again! I LOVE IT! I just wish it led to violent, angry sex! *patience* God, I love that argument between Harry and Draco! I LOVE IT!

ACK! NO! DRACO! *whimper* Draco, no! NO NO NO NO NO! You are most certainly NOT expendable, young man! NO NONONOONONONONONONO

MAH! What? Goo *brain exploded* Can't think...too many things at once...FUCK I'm glad that Draco's alive! Little bastard could've killed himself, and then Harry would've had to hunt him down and kill him for it! Not a pureblood anymore? DAMN! I didn't see that one coming! but if it means he's still alive, then FINE!

Wait, wait, wait. Draco still has magic, right? I mean, he's not a Squib now, is he? If he's no longer a pureblood, then does that make him a blood traitor or a half-blood or a Squib? *worried* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE not a Squib! I thought a lot of Draco's magic comes from his family's pureblooded traditions, though, so if he's not a pureblood anymore, then does that mean his magic is reduced or nonexistent? Please LET DRACO KEEP HIS MAGIC!!!!!

I'm so glad he's alive, but DAMN THAT WAS A CLIFFIE because now I have to know if he's okay! *whimper* Please update soon!

Seriously, I do not think you're on crack. I love the way this story is playing out, and it is very relevant. I trust you completely, and I think this story is EXACTLY believable. I'd tell you if I thought otherwise. I'm sorry your stomach is in knots, and I hope my review helped to untangle those because I LOVE THIS STORY! Can't wait for the next chapter! *bribe of brownies and ice cream in exchange for Draco keeping his magic* hahahahahahahaha Did it work?
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one word for draco's sacrifice....WOAH!!!!!

I love this story. thanks for writing it.
person misslala
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really HOT!!! I am sitting here wondering what the hell is going to happen next and why I can't just attack a little teenage blonde hottie cause even when he is snarky and mean, he's fucking hot! Wow. That was intense and beautiful. Can't wait for more.

Wench
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 40:

WOOT!!!!!!!!!!!! i just caught up on all of the chapters. finally. gods i love these boys, especially when there's smut involved. what a hot, smutty first REAL scene *fans self*. you are brilliant, love

cheers!
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person graballz
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 38--FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY!!!!! JESUS, AFTER THAT LAST CLIFFIE, I'VE BEEN ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT WAITING!!!

What?? WHAT??? WHAT GODDAMN IT WHAT DID DRACO THINK OF???? WHAT THREE WORDS WERE GOING THROUGH HIS HEAD???? WHAT????????

What???? (Why do I get the feeling I'll be using that a lot in this chapter) What is going on with Draco's vaults? Why is he switching everything to Harry and himself??? (I know you'll explain it...I just...what? *confused*)

Imperius??? Lucius was Imperiused to kill himself??? No......pureblood...vaults....Wow! Zowie!

*happy dance* They're holding hands! Several times! *GASP* HARRY KISSED HIM?!?!?!??!?!?!!? YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!! I mean, of course I'm really sad that my Draco's parents had to die for Harry to kiss him, but greater things come from their deaths!

Wow! Awwwww, no!! NONONONONONONO Harry, NO! Go back to him! Bloody Gryffindor! *sad* I trust they'll get back together, though! *wink wink*

No, no, of course you're not a COMPLETE lunatic! haha j/k I love this story!
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Draco! I hope he'll give Harry time and understand. I know it hurts but Harry did kiss him first! I soooo need chapter 37!
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i want to cry i feel that sorry for draco
eek can't wait for the next chapter
hope you had fun doing nerdy things with your friend btw :]]
xx
person Danine
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Harry can get over worrying about pleasing everyone someday...it's positively ruining his sex life. He's just so diplomatic, sitting between everyone as the face of calm and reason. I guess that why I enjoyed OotP so much, when he kicked ass and told Dumbledore he wanted to hurt him and laughed at Voldemort's followers. He would have totally had sex with Draco in book 5 if Draco would have pushed it, I'm positive (in canon!). Anyhow, loved this chapter, and hope the next is up soon!