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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person stasa
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it! Keep it up love :D
person stasa
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it! Keep it up love :D
person stasa
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I sooo need chapter 42! Draco told Harry what needed to be said. He's right. Will Harry allow people to love him? He kissed Draco's cheek. How wonderful!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was wonderful.i love how they reacted in the room.
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this chapter, I mean I would love to read about them having hot-sweaty man sex but I liked the convo between Harry and Draco. Draco yelling at Harry telling him that his families deaths weren't his fault and everything, and then Harry giving Draco a kiss on the cheek, so sweet. Hopefully, Draco yelling at Harry woke him up and he will rethink his views on the deaths and everything else. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person misslala
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I would be in Gryffindor or Slytherin - the hat might have to sort me into both, LOL I have a helluva crafty, acid streak that would fit me right in with SLytherin's, but then again, I am noble and honest so that would be my Gryffindor side. haha WHo knows, to be mean it might put me in Hufflepuff simple because it couldn't decide, LOL

Another great chapter by the way! I can't wait for more. :) PLEASE update soon!
schedule June 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 41:

i think you did an excellent job on this chapter. none of the boys were in tears and harry wasn't proclaiming his undying love for draco (thank the gods).the arguments you brought up during their conversation/yelling match were excellent as well. harry was so... well, harry, in that scene.

wonderful dear

cheers!
person NightLo
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...I agree with you, lost trust and faith can only be earned through sacrifice and hard work and...time...but that is really a huge scarifice for him.

Last chapter you have mentioned Malfoy is royal at one time, one of the longest pure-blood family dated back even to the 4 founders...such action is a huge step...but maybe...maybe without his parents, without his caring mother, without his torturous father...he can finally be himself, a real himself - as you also kindly pointed out he has nothing and believed he is nothing before...so he can make such decision and act!

What I would really like to know...how will Harry react. How will the documents show!
person NightLo
schedule June 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...this is just...great - I can see a challenge is made, clearly and adamantly. It is once and for all - total surrender for total surrender. If Harry can admit with what he wants, keep it with him and face it with Draco, Draco will just repay with all his heart (though he has already given much)!

But Harry is really a person with love in return - as he learns how unwillingly...the hurt that love can cause, so he will just give love out easily...as this is what he is...