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I'm back for some comments (in no particular order again) for chapter 45. Here goes...

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Well...first...I must admit - the two maybe just too dense towards each other - actually Harry chose Draco for emotional outbrust - because he trusted him, though may Draco be too fed up with refusal and Harry's frustrated actions...he still cannot see it, just hoping that he can see it somedays.

Secondly, oh please, no more hero act - you know, this war is not Harry's war. Yes, he is destined to kill, the chosen one. BUT, hey, we are talking about ruling! Evil domination! EVERYONE has his/her own part to play, and they cannot and must not rely on a TEENAGER/17 years old BOY to do for them...oh gods, I hate this idea very much. As I always considered that as an resemblance to sending children towards battlefield. So...Draco's arrogance and pride better shared some to Harry, knocked some senses into his mind...

And next time, if Harry ever considered such action again, maybe Draco can set a price for it, e.g. a kiss? some touching? You know, being passive and taking anguish over is not an easy task!

Wait to see if Draco's own fear of failure would work it out or not!

Yay! I'm glad they got this far! Maybe they'll get even closer! EM

seriously do not give up on this story
it's still so good and you are still managing to keep draco and harry very in-character
hope you feel better about the story soon :]
looking forward to the next chapter
xxxx

oh and forgot can you mail me the picture ?
my email is dooly_cuthbert_rockz@hotmail.co.uk
thanks x

oh that was brilliant! :) I love how he just kissed him out of the blue :) hahaha it's almost like Draco is a scratching post for a weary cat (harry) but that will change... won't it??? :) PLEASE!? They have to stay happily ever after.

I soooo need chapter 46! I know you said you don't really care for this chapter but it was great! Showed Draco thinking about what he needs. What he deserves. He realized what Harry needs. I loved it!

Love this chapter! Okay, I have some comments (in no particular order) about chapter 44. Here goes...

1. Wow...what an ending. I love how Draco realized that despite all the chaos that happened, he would still want to go through it because it paved a way for Harry and him to (finally) be together. So romantic, if not a bit odd.

2. Hmmm...now that explains why Lupin is always missing. Seems he has a lot of work on his back.

3. Cho Chang is dead? I wonder what Harry's specific reaction is when he read that news. I know he was angry and all, but did he utter anything about the incident? Or did he just glare daggers at the Daily Prophet? I think there should have been more about that. Besides, Cho was once significant in Harry's life anyway.

4. Good thing you added the part where Harry and Draco just talked. I think both of them needed it badly, since Draco just have a diary to talk to almost his entire life and Harry is now kind of being shunned by Ron and Hermione. They had found not only a smut partner (wehehe!) in each other but a genuine listener and a trustworthy friend as well.


About the horcrux, thank heavens you're not planning to write that but...oh my, you're still not sure if you're going to kill Harry or not? Oh my...*shiver shiver* I am suddenly afraid of what is to come.

Yeah, I also hope J.K. Rowling is not sadist enough to kill Harry and/or Draco in the 7th installment. Killing Dumbledore is enough, thank you very much. If what we fear happens, the world will surely be a sad, sad place.

Let's cross our fingers and hope for the best, shall we?


Keep writing. Hope you update soon!


---reiche

PS: I still hope you already have something good in mind for Draco's "present" this Friday. :D

PS PS: I tried your link (http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/298319), but alas, nothing came out. Help? Please? I really want to see what you did.

PS PS PS: Thanks for the yummy, smutty cookies! Delicious!

that chapter was sad but good too
does that mean harry knows about the ferret thing etc.
xxx

going to add the Netherlands to the list of countries that help? it's right next to England and.. well.. my country is full of people that just can't stay out of stuff like that :-P even if it has nothing to do with our country. the amount of countries we have people staying in... =_=()but I don't care if you do or not... it's never mentioned in the fanfiction anyway.
argh! I missed Draco's birthday! I'm horrible...
Wormtail still owes Harry a LifeDebt doesn't he? can't he do something with that? although beyond what people in fanfiction think up I have no idea how a LifeDebt works...
is Snape going to be evil here? I have my doubts in HBP but in this fic he hasn't done much beyond locking up Draco... and we don't know why he did: might be because of Wormtail...
if he is evil... I foresee trouble considering how he dueled with Harry... he's good at that!
nice updating scedule btw ;-) hope you keep it up!