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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person NightLo
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...such a brilliant plan, and good use of wormtail - never been that GOOD...and hopefully with such a suspicious Voldermort, who was always sure of himself and his plan and power...he would fall into the trap and question the traitor!

Well...definintely now more and more are involved with the horcrux chase, though this might expose the secret and endanger more people - on the other hand, more help would be available - hope this can be the good side of involving Tonks and Shaklbort (?)

Lastly, please, Draco please - talk some senses into Harry - make him understand that he indeed is loved and dear to SOMEONE - and he might claim something to settle his fear!
person masha
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's really good!I wonder if I can translate your story into chinese.
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I agree! I think Harry is descended from Godric and the part about the house. And Godric Hollow is perfect for a horcrux. I sooo need chapter 49!
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that was very intense. Good thing Draco stopped Harry before those deatheaters could kill Harry. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter.
person Silvae
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, very interesting, I like Draco's reaction to the Parseltongue language. I quite agree, it's nice to listen to. I doubt Draco realizes that he likes it cuz it's SEXY but I believe that to be the truth :D

I heart this story ^_^
person misslala
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was an incredible chapter! :) I love how you did that, not only the life-debt but having Draco feeling so crushed by Harry's willingness to fade into nothing without a thought. I can see why he's so hurt and god I hate to keep going for fear that their new relationship will end poorly, even if for the greater good! I don't want that! LOL

Reminds me of "Hot Fuzz" everything is done for the "Greater Good"

Argh!!! I am tearing my hair out, I just want them to live and be happy!
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can't wait for the next, can't wait for more Harry/Draco action. I hope their relationship doesn't turn out to be bad cause of their past.

I'm going to make enough money so then I could goto London, I really want to, it's one of my goal's, I want to travel there, check out everything there. And hopefully meet the famous Daniel Radcliffe, but that may not happen. I also want to move there even though I am from Canada. I hope. Anyways, great story again.
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In my review I said that Deatheaters nearly killed Harry, I don't know where I got that from, I meant to say the inferi, Deatheaters are on my brain I guess. Great chapter by the way. I love reading this story. I just love it. Don't doubt yourself, it's very good. Long but good.
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm definitely speechless with Chapters 47 and 48.

Wow...love the action-packed adventure! And, that was a close one for Harry! Phew! No, I don't think Draco would let him go after that. Too close, too close.

You really have pretty twisted but interesting ideas with the horcrux. It's a good thing you added the Inferi (hell, Voldemort wouldn't just hand a piece of his soul easily to the person who took his power!)...and nice touch with Draco's realization there! It just shows how attached he is to Harry now. Yay! *Throws party confetti around*

Anyway, I'm still anticipating the hot Draco-Harry action! Poor Draco...his birthday had come and gone and still no "present"!

About Snape...I have an odd feeling that he is a "bad nut", as Willy Wonka's chipmunks would put it. I don't know, maybe it had something to do with Pettigrew's statement (
person NightLo
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...what a scene and experience! But why could voldermort create a horcrux in Harry's home? Did he really die immediately after trying to kill little Harry? So this meant...after killing James, he created a horcrux and designed the inferi trap!

But lucky that Draco was there, and sounds can send inside the shield, and he seemed to always able to talk some senses into Haryy's mind...now they both must work and train harder, so that they can be there always for each.

However, what worried me most was...if only Harry can touch the horcrux - this means only he can destroy it...