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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So the title has been passed on! I sooo need chapter 52!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whew! Awesome chapter and I love how Remus passes on the title :) I can't wait to see Draco's Patronus :P
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well - all I can say - desparation and fear finally broke the tension and brought them to each other. Death, Voldermort's trap and close steps planning, powerless and helplessness towards danger, being separated and feelings...all got mix and very need a way to burst out...really being boys and 17 were not easy.
With already 4 horcrux gone, one being Voldermort, and if one being Nagini, they very much needed to find out the last one and started training again - perhaps they also needed emotional and psychological control/therapy to release constant stress and desparate feeling...though they must wait and see the reaction of the community, the ministry and Voldermort over such plan...
However, I am wondering, what did Minerva do now? Still busy over Hogwarts? How about Moody and Ginny and Luna and Neville? Would they join the war and preparation? It seemed that the four were quite lonely in fighting against the evil...would the others and the community realize they have put too much on 2 17 teenagers?
With already 4 horcrux gone, one being Voldermort, and if one being Nagini, they very much needed to find out the last one and started training again - perhaps they also needed emotional and psychological control/therapy to release constant stress and desparate feeling...though they must wait and see the reaction of the community, the ministry and Voldermort over such plan...
However, I am wondering, what did Minerva do now? Still busy over Hogwarts? How about Moody and Ginny and Luna and Neville? Would they join the war and preparation? It seemed that the four were quite lonely in fighting against the evil...would the others and the community realize they have put too much on 2 17 teenagers?
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was a pretty intense sex there...kinda reminds me of Brokeback Mountain.
Yahoo!!! Thank Merlin they had sex! Yipee!
I understand why you made it into a very angry sex. With too much emotions running around like that, they are really bound to an angry bout. And yeah, I do agree that men are the physical type when extreme emotions arise.
Wow...the sex is just breathtaking. It's not the typical "sudden, no attachments" sex I usually read in DMHP fics. I just observed that most fics here in AFF lack the "human" in sex...or maybe their plot is a tad too short that the gradual build in the relationship suffers, hence, their sex lacks meaning. However, in your fic, it is full of emotion, full of passion, full of need. At the same time, it is also full of tenderness and care...Man, that's how sex should be like!
I bet Draco and Harry enjoyed your take on sex! Hehehe!
I'm glad you liked my last review. Darn, you got to admit that was too lengthy.
I knew you wouldn't disclose Snape's true "nut-ness"...Okay, what I said is just weird...*sigh* Anyway, I guess I have to wait for your ultimate revelation.
Speaking of secrets, I also have one for you!
I have a present for you, but I won't tell you what it is just yet (since it's not done and I want to surprise you) You'll soon find out anyway. :D I just hope you will like it.
Keep writing! I really REALLY love what you've written so far! Can't wait for more!
---reiche
PS: By the way, about the second to the last statement in your A/N, the chapter worked in your story. I thought you intended to write it this way, so I was surprised that you admitted that this was not your initial plan. Thank Merlin for 'accidents' like these!
Yahoo!!! Thank Merlin they had sex! Yipee!
I understand why you made it into a very angry sex. With too much emotions running around like that, they are really bound to an angry bout. And yeah, I do agree that men are the physical type when extreme emotions arise.
Wow...the sex is just breathtaking. It's not the typical "sudden, no attachments" sex I usually read in DMHP fics. I just observed that most fics here in AFF lack the "human" in sex...or maybe their plot is a tad too short that the gradual build in the relationship suffers, hence, their sex lacks meaning. However, in your fic, it is full of emotion, full of passion, full of need. At the same time, it is also full of tenderness and care...Man, that's how sex should be like!
I bet Draco and Harry enjoyed your take on sex! Hehehe!
I'm glad you liked my last review. Darn, you got to admit that was too lengthy.
I knew you wouldn't disclose Snape's true "nut-ness"...Okay, what I said is just weird...*sigh* Anyway, I guess I have to wait for your ultimate revelation.
Speaking of secrets, I also have one for you!
I have a present for you, but I won't tell you what it is just yet (since it's not done and I want to surprise you) You'll soon find out anyway. :D I just hope you will like it.
Keep writing! I really REALLY love what you've written so far! Can't wait for more!
---reiche
PS: By the way, about the second to the last statement in your A/N, the chapter worked in your story. I thought you intended to write it this way, so I was surprised that you admitted that this was not your initial plan. Thank Merlin for 'accidents' like these!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ch 50:
well....finally. i absolutely loved it except for one part: the lack of lube. since that was harry's 1st, he would have torn 'cause draco only used spit. i dont really see that as realistic. but damn it was HOT!!!!!!!!!
great job, cheers!
well....finally. i absolutely loved it except for one part: the lack of lube. since that was harry's 1st, he would have torn 'cause draco only used spit. i dont really see that as realistic. but damn it was HOT!!!!!!!!!
great job, cheers!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Lovn
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah very hot! Cna't wait for the next!
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh.my.god.
i hope neither of them regrets that and they have a proper chance to talk about it
and i hope this 'like it was the only chance that there would ever be.' wasn't a hint of anything...
i've had the worst day today and this cheered me right up =]
eek. 51 ... can't wait
xxxxxx
i hope neither of them regrets that and they have a proper chance to talk about it
and i hope this 'like it was the only chance that there would ever be.' wasn't a hint of anything...
i've had the worst day today and this cheered me right up =]
eek. 51 ... can't wait
xxxxxx
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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh and just a quick question
didn't everyone hear them when they were having sex ?
or did they silence the room
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didn't everyone hear them when they were having sex ?
or did they silence the room
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you! That was hot and brilliant and OMG poor Draco and Harry!!!!!! Wow. I love it! :) I can't wait to see what happens. I will be devastated if either or both die, but I can't help it, LOL I love it that much.