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speaking of impulsive... *rolls eyes* if you see someone (someone you know is in the house) walking out of the bathroom... you don't immediately attack. even if you thought he was supposed to be locked up. if he escaped he wouldn't be in the bathroom now would he? that's just...
I too am not a fan... well, I like bashingfics of almost every character except Harry so... will it be bashing or not so bad? Ron is not so nice either huh? why did he smirk about the dementors, especially considering Harry? ok, I know why, but it is still... argh.
is Ginny going to try to get back together with Harry? now that would/will cause a problem.
and I have no idea who Harry is talking about! it is driving me nuts! Snape? I can't think of anyone else... they are all either friends, people who died who he thinks are brave or people he thinks are evil... or did I miss someone? *broods* I hate unresolved questions...
hope for more soon!

So - a confrontation is in order - ex girlfriend versus same sex sexy lover...I am thrilled to read more between Draco and Ginny, and how and who will Harry protect more? However, always being a gentleman and a hero - there is a great chance of a more upset and anger Draco in coming chapters.

You know, with so many enemies around, Draco best used his charm and intelligence to win others' hearts and support - now he won over Remus and Harry and Hermione, if he want to have more support on...'sexy/interesting' stuff - better to win over the twins SOON!

Hum...frustration and tension and uncertainty will always lead to argument - would another anger sex come along soon?

aww loved that chapter
i think it's one of my favourites so far
they're sort of properly together then =]
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This is a good one.Well done!!Can't wait the next.I'm so glad that I already begin to translate the first chapter.

OOOOH Coward - Snape, connection much!? Wow, I can't wait, stop teasing with the Patronus already dammit! LOL EVIL WOMAN! :P I love you anyway though. *happy dance* I don't know why I keep reading this, LOL I KNOW someone I love in this story is going to die, LOL But I can't STAY AWAY. You have bewitched me! How could you!? :P

Well...I esp liked you described how painful it was for Harry's part - actually sex can hurt a lot, esp. for gay men, I always wonder...in other fanfics how can the bottom acted so normally after having sex. Even with the help of lube, strecthing and penetration can burn and hurt. If you can read chinese, I will definitely refer three brilliant pieces of discussion of anal sex for you to read. And I must say - being realistic is much better than imaginary...

Well, it seemed that the ministry has FINALLY something to do, esp. the damn minister, they ALWAYS seemed to me as burdensome and helpless in every way - except perhaps for Arthur, Tonks, Mad eye Moody and Shacklebolt. You know, again, that was a war, how can they just sit back and...and...ask a teenage to act, then SUDDENLY appear whenever and wherever there is a chance for headlines....

However, as the Daily Prophet has reviewed that piece of news - would the Ministry try to locate Harry? And has they told the Weasley clans, others must be very very worried about Harry, they must act hurry!

Lastly, for Remus - yeah, the same feeling would happen to Harry if ever he finds out that the Dudsley are either killed/gone. Even Remus and Harry hate about wormtail/the Dudsley, still they are families, related bloodlines or once someone closed, death can still bring...sadness - would Harry able to talk him out? Or Tonks?

BTW, anything more on Snape?

And the romantic air turned sour the next morning...

Hahaha! That WAS a reality check...most especially for Harry. Merlin, that must have hurt! No wonder he didn't dare sit on the wooden chair in the dining hall...

I just noticed something really really sweet in the part where Harry asked Draco his darkest fear. Yeah, Draco said it was the Dementors, but his explanations told something more. Sheesh...Now I know that Draco can be stupid sometimes. Merlin...it's quite obvious...his greatest fear is to lose Harry. ("And what frightened me most about the whole idea was that, without a soul, I would have to sit back and watch as Harry moved on with his life, finding love and comfort inside someone else instead

I love this chapter the best probably. I loved the humor and playfulness in the beginning with Harry and Draco joking around and pushing each other. I also like how you included how harry silenced the door and locked it. Who knows what kind of trouble that might of brought at the breakfast table ^_^. Made me laugh a lot during this chapter, And I know how you feel about Remus and Sirius, I feel the same way. I have always loved them both. And the whole Remus and Ron thing... hahaha, I couldn't stop laughing after I was reading that. This is a great chapter. You always put a lot of effort and thought into these stories and I think that is what makes them so creative and fun to read, and makes you an excellent writer! Can't wait till chapter 52!

Ryko

When I first started reading this, I thought it was completed, but now that I have reached chapter 50, I realize it's a WIP. Whyyyyyyyyyyy, I love this story too much for it to just stop suddenly and unexpectedly. That is exactly why I don't read WIPs but I will now, just this one time. =)
Great writing, great style, great EVERYTHING. I love how you didn't make everything OOC for Draco and you didn't really rush anything. Update very, very soon please and make it extra long to make up for last chapter's shortness...with extra Harry/Draco action. Please. ;)