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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person misslala
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god! That was a helluva chapter! :) I LOVE IT! I did not expect anyone to walk in, well, maybe just a little, but that was absolutely incredible! I love how Harry said Draco was his equal, I adore it and you put my emotions through the gamut on this chapter!!!!!! How dare you! :P *j/k* Brilliant as always, I am highly impressed with this and the way things are progressing steadily. Now, I am bracing myself for the inevitable :( Someone will die soon, who, I don't know, but I DON"T WANT THEM TOO, lol

Hope to see an update soon! :)
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Everyone knows! Draco knows how Harry feels about him! He's been made Head Boy. I sooo need chapter 55!
person Danine
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so many chapters behind and can't keep my eyes open (just got off of work--long work week) I promise to catch up tomorrow and leave a proper review! Don't think I've abandoned you for a moment, because I haven't!
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, I knew it!! And Harry loves Draco, though I don't recall Draco telling him the same, well at least while Harry's conscious...though it is implied. Ginny is finally gone after she was a total bitch this past chapter. "The Weasel" better come around because Harry has to have his bestest buddy after all. Now the boys have to tackle the last Horcruxes! Can't wait!
person Ryko427
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... I tore through this chapter like a Christmas present! (no direct relation to the Christmas in the story =P) But I cried, I laughed... I was aroused.... This was one of my favorite chapters by far! The Emotion! The Love! Playfulness! The Confusion! The Anger! The Anguish! The Sadness! All of that came through with a punch. I gasped so many times during this chapter. Especially when I heard the door click open. I said to myself (OMG PREPARE FOR THE SUDDEN EMOTION AND SCREAMING ABOUT TO COME UNDERWAY!) And it did. I did feel a tear or two roll down my cheeks when Harry was saying that he loved Ginny, but then he cleared things up later and I smiled. My heart was breaking in half just as was Draco's heart. I also loved the cuddling! Yay! Cuteness of Harry and Draco! About time! I love sex and all, but I adore cute couples ^_^. I would also love to hear your dreams of related to Harry Potter. I will admit that was not my first dream of Harry Potter, I did have another one when it was just me and Harry in the Common Room... but thats for another time...

10/10! Five Thumbs up! Grammy Awards, Oscars, you got it all with this chapter! Can't can't can't wait till the next update! Another question for ya, Do you live in America, or Europe? I live on the east coast, so each update is like a bed time chapter because I always get them right when they are updated around 10:00pm for me or 11:00pm. But anyways! Loved it, sorry for the long review, had so many thoughts bubbling that needed to be expressed in this chapter. Ate Logo! Or.... Adeus! Trying to remember my Portuguese -_-... I have packets over the summer... yippe....

Ryko
person Ryko427
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I felt that I needed to share something with you. Last night I was reading chapter 53, and then went to bed. Well because that was my last thought, it was bound to end up in a dream, and it was a cute dream. Bear with me, because when I woke up and thought about it, it seemed silly. Now the dream first started out with me talking to some very cute stranger who apparently I knew quite well. I was asking him how I was related to a person that just died (we were heading to a funeral) and he said that she was my cousin or... aunt or something. But anyways!

We sat down on some chairs that were a little bit away from the casket and in the casket was an old woman. The boy next to me said that she was Tonk's aunt. People were dressing up all funny, wearing weird *tribal clothing* and such. Apparently this was the way to pay your respects to the deceased. That was when I suddenly was transformed into Harry, and the boy next to me was Draco. (Now I am not exactly sure if I was Harry, it could of been the other way around now that I think of it. Dreams often begin to slip from you after you wake.)

Draco put this green paper crown on my head that didn't fit me at all. It would keep falling off my head, so he was just smirking and trying to figure out a way to make it fit correctly. Then he put it upside down and I felt the urge to place my head on his shoulder. Of course he shifted out of the way of me and left my head just tilted into his seat. That was when he began to play with my hair through the crown and would curl it around his fingers and toss it, brush it, move it, and just smiling. That was when of course the dog licked my face -_-.

Big huge 220 pound rottweiler. Of course I love him and all, but it made me angry that he ruined a very cute, sweet, and funny dream. Well anyways! Just felt like I needed to share it with someone, and who better yet than a lovely writer ^_^.

Ryko
person berkie88
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! you say there will be parseltongue! I love it! it's forgotten he can do that to often...
patroni... the ones we saw in books 5 and 6 were, werewolves, stags, swans, otters and I believe in book 4 Dumbledore sent a Phoenix patronus to get Hagrid when Crouch came to Hogwarts (and died). you might want to check the last one... and it was never said it was a Patronus, but I believe they do use them for that? I can't find book 6 but that's what Tonks used hers for right? but anyway, if the Phoenix was a Patronus magical creatures can be done... people... well, we've only seen animals, even if some represent people. so I doubt it.
btw, a lot of DA members couldn't so the charm by the time the lessons stopped...
ok, enough of that... why did Harry say 'hang on'? and considering Draco started it with saying Christmas was never anything good... it won't end well right?
hope for more soon!
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think the way you've made ginny is exactly right.
i don't think she could honestly be in love with him. she liked him before she even knew him.
and it really annoys me in the books when ginny tags along with ron harry and hermione. it's like get friends your own age!
anywayyyyy ...
that was a great chapter. worth the wait =]

eek why did harry stop ?
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schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 54! I thought Harry was going to come clean with them. He's certainly getting angry on Draco's behalf.
person stasa
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That Ginny can be a real bitch when she wants to. Glad to see the twins starting to react nice to Draco, if they ever pooled pranks together, it will be legendary...
And please, please continue soon, I need to see what happened next, you left at kind of a not leavable spot... Does that make any sense????
Anyway keep it up... :D