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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...breath-taking chapter.
Draco's Patronus is a LION? Heheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh... *rolls onto the floor and laughs uncontrollably* Talk about paradox, him having a sign of a Gryffindor when he's the most Slytherin of them all! Something must have died inside Draco when he saw his Patronus.
I still have no questions regarding this chapter. Hmmm...I wonder what Petunia will say to Harry. And Vernon Dursley's dead? Wow...I thought he would stay for a while longer than that. It's not such a bad idea, though.
It's beginning to get tough for both of them, and again, Harry and Draco's mortality is given focus in this chapter. Now, it's Draco's turn to make Harry nuts with the dying stuff. I wonder how Harry would react to it. The last time Harry was in Draco's situation, it triggered a rough bout of sex...although I'm not expecting to see that same reaction since this time, Draco's hurt pretty badly. I don't think Harry would even dare. Maybe he would let Draco recuperate from his injury then give in to another rough bout of sex...although if they could find a position now that is comfortable for both of them...Hehe!
Anyway, I'm feeling a bit sober because I am, once again, reminded of my own mortality. Merlin, I am reminded of it EVERY - SINGLE - DAY...mainly because of my theology and philosophy classes.
About your gift, I suggest you check your e-mail once in a while. I will send it to you in a couple of hours' time. :D
Keep writing. Can't wait for chapter 57!
---reiche
Draco's Patronus is a LION? Heheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh... *rolls onto the floor and laughs uncontrollably* Talk about paradox, him having a sign of a Gryffindor when he's the most Slytherin of them all! Something must have died inside Draco when he saw his Patronus.
I still have no questions regarding this chapter. Hmmm...I wonder what Petunia will say to Harry. And Vernon Dursley's dead? Wow...I thought he would stay for a while longer than that. It's not such a bad idea, though.
It's beginning to get tough for both of them, and again, Harry and Draco's mortality is given focus in this chapter. Now, it's Draco's turn to make Harry nuts with the dying stuff. I wonder how Harry would react to it. The last time Harry was in Draco's situation, it triggered a rough bout of sex...although I'm not expecting to see that same reaction since this time, Draco's hurt pretty badly. I don't think Harry would even dare. Maybe he would let Draco recuperate from his injury then give in to another rough bout of sex...although if they could find a position now that is comfortable for both of them...Hehe!
Anyway, I'm feeling a bit sober because I am, once again, reminded of my own mortality. Merlin, I am reminded of it EVERY - SINGLE - DAY...mainly because of my theology and philosophy classes.
About your gift, I suggest you check your e-mail once in a while. I will send it to you in a couple of hours' time. :D
Keep writing. Can't wait for chapter 57!
---reiche
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And it ended all too soon once again...
Wow, the descriptions of what is happening in London are very vivid and detailed. I wonder what will happen to Draco. Merlin, him being hit by a stray bullet DID occur in a very bad moment. That is quite sad for Draco...just when he's savoring his flight after a long time, he gets hit. Just perfect.
Thank you for clearing up the gift-giving question I asked previously. It really enlightened me.
About Snape...I still wonder what you plan for him to be. But I feel my questions regarding his true nature will soon be answered.
Draco's Patronus haven't materialized yet, am I right? Hmmm...I wonder what his will look like.
I'm glad to hear that Draco and Harry would more or less be equal when it comes to bed. I'm so excited to read that part!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh my...what would happen to Draco? *shiver shiver* I really hope he would just be fine.
---reiche
PS: I'm sad to hear that you had a horrible day. I hope everything would be fine for you soon. Maybe this little revelation would cheer you up: I will be able to give you your present tomorrow! Not Saturday or Sunday as I expected myself to be done. Actually, I can already give it to you but I'm still doing some final touch-ups. I guess I'm a bit OC when it comes to...hehe! Can't tell you that bit of information until tomorrow!
PS PS: Sorry if the review's a bit short. I don't have that much questions regarding this chapter.
Wow, the descriptions of what is happening in London are very vivid and detailed. I wonder what will happen to Draco. Merlin, him being hit by a stray bullet DID occur in a very bad moment. That is quite sad for Draco...just when he's savoring his flight after a long time, he gets hit. Just perfect.
Thank you for clearing up the gift-giving question I asked previously. It really enlightened me.
About Snape...I still wonder what you plan for him to be. But I feel my questions regarding his true nature will soon be answered.
Draco's Patronus haven't materialized yet, am I right? Hmmm...I wonder what his will look like.
I'm glad to hear that Draco and Harry would more or less be equal when it comes to bed. I'm so excited to read that part!
Can't wait for the next chapter! Oh my...what would happen to Draco? *shiver shiver* I really hope he would just be fine.
---reiche
PS: I'm sad to hear that you had a horrible day. I hope everything would be fine for you soon. Maybe this little revelation would cheer you up: I will be able to give you your present tomorrow! Not Saturday or Sunday as I expected myself to be done. Actually, I can already give it to you but I'm still doing some final touch-ups. I guess I'm a bit OC when it comes to...hehe! Can't tell you that bit of information until tomorrow!
PS PS: Sorry if the review's a bit short. I don't have that much questions regarding this chapter.
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh merlin, this Draco is getting more and more...humurous...as long as he can better out Harry, as long as he can take little advantages...still he has his own ways of declaring love. However, I must say, Harry is rather dense (though Ron also), if you want 'something' in return, Draco should voice out more directly!
Also - I did agree that making friends with the twins will help greatly - just imagine all the 'helpful' and 'interesting' products that they can specially make for you in bedroom...they would love this challenge. BTW, will we able to find some of their products soon?
...but oh...now Draco know how dangerous that we can be...and would his injury and 'sacrifice' knock some senses into Harry? But all I could say...you really love him too deeply, Draco Malfoy...
Also - I did agree that making friends with the twins will help greatly - just imagine all the 'helpful' and 'interesting' products that they can specially make for you in bedroom...they would love this challenge. BTW, will we able to find some of their products soon?
...but oh...now Draco know how dangerous that we can be...and would his injury and 'sacrifice' knock some senses into Harry? But all I could say...you really love him too deeply, Draco Malfoy...
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, you definitely hate him, Draco. That's why you get a boner everytime you see him. Because hatred and sex are just made for one another O_O
Silly boy.
Ahhhh, I need to keep reading, because Draco's sexual tension gives ME sexual tension.
Silly boy.
Ahhhh, I need to keep reading, because Draco's sexual tension gives ME sexual tension.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco, I'm really looking forward to the following chapters because more of him is coming through with each one. I feel a lot more sympathy reading this than I do in the books, when you're reading from Harry's perspective it's kinda hard to see how hurtful some of the things they do to him are. :( They're both horrible to one another.
It's obviously love.
:D
It's obviously love.
:D
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Draco got shot! NOOOOOO He can't die! Not yet! :( No death!!!!!! Harry just told him he loved him! *cries* Poor Draco. I can't wait to read more. Fucking muggles, LOL ARGH.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you I love you I love you - yes - such a great act! Riping of all important leaders - though you are evil and is haunting and hunting little Harry, but Voldermort, you are a great guy...you also somehow 'save' our muggle world......just love this idea too MUCH!!!
Though that kind of chaos is not something I like to know and live with, but the idea....is just too...> v < (too afraid to...you know)
However, this served good. Actually all should know this is a war, not a fight between two people, esp. they knew nothing about the prophecy, they knew and understood nothing about the 'chosen' thing. However, they would expect Harry or a TEENAGE boy (or worse, the ministry, when did history tell you to trust a governing body?) to stand up and take the charge. The ultimatum sent by Voldermort should wake everyone up - no one is safe, no one would not count in it. This is their war, they need to prepare, they need to be trained, they really need to be reminded. Actually what I hate most - how can the adults just stand back and let one 17-year-old BOY fight for them? And what kind of a 'human' to hurt and hunt and torture a 1-year-old baby and a 17-year-old boy...Voldermort and death eaters are all insane! And you just described them too right...
For Draco, the act of 'donating Manor' is just too noble of you, and you really love him deeply - your history and standhold and you are/have willingly given up because of Harry...well, I never foresee that you are such a romantics...no wonder Harry would think you of a little Gryffindor, still you can prove you are Slytherin at heart!
Hum...for the Dursleys - served them right. They should be frightened for a good amount of time - better for them to remember for a lifetime - for all that they have done to Harry...evil grin XD.
Now I am really looking forward to your story, as such chaos have never been seen in any fanfics!
Though that kind of chaos is not something I like to know and live with, but the idea....is just too...> v < (too afraid to...you know)
However, this served good. Actually all should know this is a war, not a fight between two people, esp. they knew nothing about the prophecy, they knew and understood nothing about the 'chosen' thing. However, they would expect Harry or a TEENAGE boy (or worse, the ministry, when did history tell you to trust a governing body?) to stand up and take the charge. The ultimatum sent by Voldermort should wake everyone up - no one is safe, no one would not count in it. This is their war, they need to prepare, they need to be trained, they really need to be reminded. Actually what I hate most - how can the adults just stand back and let one 17-year-old BOY fight for them? And what kind of a 'human' to hurt and hunt and torture a 1-year-old baby and a 17-year-old boy...Voldermort and death eaters are all insane! And you just described them too right...
For Draco, the act of 'donating Manor' is just too noble of you, and you really love him deeply - your history and standhold and you are/have willingly given up because of Harry...well, I never foresee that you are such a romantics...no wonder Harry would think you of a little Gryffindor, still you can prove you are Slytherin at heart!
Hum...for the Dursleys - served them right. They should be frightened for a good amount of time - better for them to remember for a lifetime - for all that they have done to Harry...evil grin XD.
Now I am really looking forward to your story, as such chaos have never been seen in any fanfics!
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that lsat bit made me laugh gryffindor draco lol
and will we get to see malfoy mannor, i'd love to see your description of it. it's always been my favourite place in the books too probably because i would love to see where draco grew up.
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and will we get to see malfoy mannor, i'd love to see your description of it. it's always been my favourite place in the books too probably because i would love to see where draco grew up.
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June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...we don't speak German as a language here... yes a lot of people know German because it is similar to Dutch and is taught as a secondairy language in school (like English is). a lot of groups like that are given English names though so English names though so that would have worked... never German. I'm not sure what you want the name of the group to be or else I could have translated... The Control?
I think the main reason people keep it out of the fanfiction is because most people write/read fanfiction to relax and forget... a Muggle-Wizardwar is not easily resolved (the wizards may never be hidden again) and would cost a lot and is angsty and very real... so not very relaxing... same reason why Global Warming and the Rainforest are hardly ever mentioned... it'seems so easy with magic doesn't it?
and I think Voldemort had an ulterior motive in broadcasting it... as someone who grew up in the Muggleworld, around the time of the second WW... I think he'd know how Muggles would react...
and why should the wizards hide? because they know that a war would cost both sides and there are too many Muggles. and living peacefully together, espceially once they find something they can fear, is not a human trait unfortunately...
and Harry going out in the middle of a warzone to check on his (hated!) family... that's just MAD! *sigh* Gryffindors!!! make you want to pull out your hair! :-P love the Slytherin-Gryffindor interaction btw... he should have seen that coming!
hope for more soon! (why do I ever still add that anyway?! I wouldnt'be reviewing otherwise right?)
I think the main reason people keep it out of the fanfiction is because most people write/read fanfiction to relax and forget... a Muggle-Wizardwar is not easily resolved (the wizards may never be hidden again) and would cost a lot and is angsty and very real... so not very relaxing... same reason why Global Warming and the Rainforest are hardly ever mentioned... it'seems so easy with magic doesn't it?
and I think Voldemort had an ulterior motive in broadcasting it... as someone who grew up in the Muggleworld, around the time of the second WW... I think he'd know how Muggles would react...
and why should the wizards hide? because they know that a war would cost both sides and there are too many Muggles. and living peacefully together, espceially once they find something they can fear, is not a human trait unfortunately...
and Harry going out in the middle of a warzone to check on his (hated!) family... that's just MAD! *sigh* Gryffindors!!! make you want to pull out your hair! :-P love the Slytherin-Gryffindor interaction btw... he should have seen that coming!
hope for more soon! (why do I ever still add that anyway?! I wouldnt'be reviewing otherwise right?)