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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally caught up *whew*
my, this has taken an interesting turn. i thought the G8 thing was really cool to encorporate. im curious to see how this mess will be cleaned up
a lion patronus!?!??!?!? thats brilliant lol. there's no way he'll ever live it down *grins*
cant wait to see what happens, cheers!!!
my, this has taken an interesting turn. i thought the G8 thing was really cool to encorporate. im curious to see how this mess will be cleaned up
a lion patronus!?!??!?!? thats brilliant lol. there's no way he'll ever live it down *grins*
cant wait to see what happens, cheers!!!
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okiely Dokiely.
Let me see...
Well I liked it, it was also confusing and painful. What I mean by painful was seeing Draco in pain. But of course I knew he couldn't die ^_^. But it pained me that you put in "I know by the end of all of this, I will die" You make me feel sad! But you are the master writer who plays with the hearts of others =(. Not saying this a bad thing, just if Draco dies, like I stated before, I will ball my eyes out. Anyways!
I thought this chapter was very interesting. I am wondering... as to how Auntie saved Dudders. My opinion is... there is magic in her, and she used it to protect Dudley. Although... if she did use magic... that is quite odd cause she is a squib =/. But I would love it if she did^_^ I always liked her and her description, the bony face, ha!
I am also glad that Draco is accepting Ron, no more Weasel! Or so I hope. And by god, I love Hermione, she is such a genius ^_^. And Draco was tearing up my heart, I wanted to scream "You are not going to die, and this is going to work!".
You also implanted things that are refrenced to the books, which I thought was very cool. What I mean is, how you took Fred and Georges willingness to take Dudley with huge grins. I will never forget Book 4 when they dropped the candy, hahah! Priceless!
Also loved how the Patronous is a lion! Hahaha! I had a feeling it was going to be a lion!
I also just want Harry to be on top! Just once! I know you love Draco and all, you want him to be the bigger man, and I adore Draco! But just for one paragraph, make Harry on top! I think it is only fair that Draco is filled with warm liquid... if you catch my drift... >=D
Anyways, Great Chapter, Can't wait till the next one. I am soooo curious as to how Petunia defended Dudley from whatever attacked her. Maybe she is more magical than is led to believe... I wonder if that is the protection Dumbledore mentioned... anyways! Looking forward to chapter 58!
Much Love and Enjoying the Cookies, you make a lot!
Ryko
Let me see...
Well I liked it, it was also confusing and painful. What I mean by painful was seeing Draco in pain. But of course I knew he couldn't die ^_^. But it pained me that you put in "I know by the end of all of this, I will die" You make me feel sad! But you are the master writer who plays with the hearts of others =(. Not saying this a bad thing, just if Draco dies, like I stated before, I will ball my eyes out. Anyways!
I thought this chapter was very interesting. I am wondering... as to how Auntie saved Dudders. My opinion is... there is magic in her, and she used it to protect Dudley. Although... if she did use magic... that is quite odd cause she is a squib =/. But I would love it if she did^_^ I always liked her and her description, the bony face, ha!
I am also glad that Draco is accepting Ron, no more Weasel! Or so I hope. And by god, I love Hermione, she is such a genius ^_^. And Draco was tearing up my heart, I wanted to scream "You are not going to die, and this is going to work!".
You also implanted things that are refrenced to the books, which I thought was very cool. What I mean is, how you took Fred and Georges willingness to take Dudley with huge grins. I will never forget Book 4 when they dropped the candy, hahah! Priceless!
Also loved how the Patronous is a lion! Hahaha! I had a feeling it was going to be a lion!
I also just want Harry to be on top! Just once! I know you love Draco and all, you want him to be the bigger man, and I adore Draco! But just for one paragraph, make Harry on top! I think it is only fair that Draco is filled with warm liquid... if you catch my drift... >=D
Anyways, Great Chapter, Can't wait till the next one. I am soooo curious as to how Petunia defended Dudley from whatever attacked her. Maybe she is more magical than is led to believe... I wonder if that is the protection Dumbledore mentioned... anyways! Looking forward to chapter 58!
Much Love and Enjoying the Cookies, you make a lot!
Ryko
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First of all: HOW DARE YOU???? How dare you do this to us readers!!!! *hugs Draco* But you must be kidding me... Hermione... did she? no way... although destiny has a weird sense of humor, so why not? Same goes for Petunia, will she ever come to terms with it? (And most importantly am I reading something into all this or are my assumptions correct? :D) A LION????? I don't have any problems with the Gryffindor connection, that's sweet, but Draco and a LION??? Good idea BTW, I really didn't see that coming.
I must tell you, you are amazing! I simply fell in love with this story, it is everything I miss in the original. I'm at the moment reading HBP and I must tell you, I think yours is much better. And not only because Draco and Harry are together, that's only an added bonus. :D I mean look at HBP. Everybody has gone MAD!!! The only sane girl in Hogwarts, Hermione, has gone completey crazy over Ron, who was rather sweet earlier but now is simply an idiot (Ron and Lavender kissing? I don't think I'll get that picture out of my had EVER!!!). Harry... well he is simply himself, and I never really liked him. And there is of course Ginny... she... aaarrrrgh, I can't stand her. I mean I used to like her, but the way she behaves now... Why does she always have to hurt people? She is so much like the Draco we see in the books, the only difference is that I'm convinced that in Draco's case this is only a mask that he has to wear because of his father, and Voldemort and because he is in Slytherin. But Ginny... she has no reason to act like that, she doesn't HAVE TO!! I HATE HER!!!!!! The only characters I like in HBP, are Draco (what a surprise), and Luna (yes I know, quite a scary thought, really...), and they are barely present. Moreover, I like your style of writing better, it's so much more emotional (yes, I know it's partly because it's a diary, but still...). Anyway, I LOVE THIS STORY, and you're amazing!! :D
BTW, I'm convinced that Auntie Rowling :D, is a secret H/D shipper. No, really... I mean I don't think it's normal that after Hermione warns Harry that some girls want to give him a love potion, he immeadiatelly thinks of DRaco... that's just weird! *smiles knowingly* :)
I must tell you, you are amazing! I simply fell in love with this story, it is everything I miss in the original. I'm at the moment reading HBP and I must tell you, I think yours is much better. And not only because Draco and Harry are together, that's only an added bonus. :D I mean look at HBP. Everybody has gone MAD!!! The only sane girl in Hogwarts, Hermione, has gone completey crazy over Ron, who was rather sweet earlier but now is simply an idiot (Ron and Lavender kissing? I don't think I'll get that picture out of my had EVER!!!). Harry... well he is simply himself, and I never really liked him. And there is of course Ginny... she... aaarrrrgh, I can't stand her. I mean I used to like her, but the way she behaves now... Why does she always have to hurt people? She is so much like the Draco we see in the books, the only difference is that I'm convinced that in Draco's case this is only a mask that he has to wear because of his father, and Voldemort and because he is in Slytherin. But Ginny... she has no reason to act like that, she doesn't HAVE TO!! I HATE HER!!!!!! The only characters I like in HBP, are Draco (what a surprise), and Luna (yes I know, quite a scary thought, really...), and they are barely present. Moreover, I like your style of writing better, it's so much more emotional (yes, I know it's partly because it's a diary, but still...). Anyway, I LOVE THIS STORY, and you're amazing!! :D
BTW, I'm convinced that Auntie Rowling :D, is a secret H/D shipper. No, really... I mean I don't think it's normal that after Hermione warns Harry that some girls want to give him a love potion, he immeadiatelly thinks of DRaco... that's just weird! *smiles knowingly* :)
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...actually while reading the wound that Draco got, I just realized there was a catch there, however, with that potion, the mystery would be solved, so just leave it...
However, the most astonishing turn out really would be Draco's patronus...that would be a wonderful story to tell to children...for happy memories - really a lifetime joke XD...
Finally with the surprise from Aunt Peutina...and her call out to Draco...just hope she can be of use later...and really, with such a challenge, a Malfoy should never back down and show what real prank and torture make of...
However, the most astonishing turn out really would be Draco's patronus...that would be a wonderful story to tell to children...for happy memories - really a lifetime joke XD...
Finally with the surprise from Aunt Peutina...and her call out to Draco...just hope she can be of use later...and really, with such a challenge, a Malfoy should never back down and show what real prank and torture make of...
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok so i knew draco would not die...i mean he is writing this. unless harry found it and finished. but dont want to think that way i refuse to think that way.
i do love dracos patronus. it is so fitting.
now with patunia i think i figured something out but not gonna say i will just wait.
also gotta love hermonie and her research and skills at potions.
i do love dracos patronus. it is so fitting.
now with patunia i think i figured something out but not gonna say i will just wait.
also gotta love hermonie and her research and skills at potions.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a lion wooooowwwwww that was a shock!
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What is she talking about, and how did Hermione know which potion to make?
Update soon please, I
Update soon please, I
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I have quite a few things to mention about this lovely chapter, so I will start off with humor.
"He handed me my Slytherin scarf from my trunk along with a pair of gloves and thick socks. The socks were fuzzy.
Fuzzy socks.
I smirked at him. They were NOT mine."
I adored that scene ^_^, I was in hysterics and love the fuzzy socks ordeal. Funny how Harry lends his clothes, I think it is cute.
"I have to admit that, despite the circumstances, I felt liberated. I haven
"He handed me my Slytherin scarf from my trunk along with a pair of gloves and thick socks. The socks were fuzzy.
Fuzzy socks.
I smirked at him. They were NOT mine."
I adored that scene ^_^, I was in hysterics and love the fuzzy socks ordeal. Funny how Harry lends his clothes, I think it is cute.
"I have to admit that, despite the circumstances, I felt liberated. I haven
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quick question I forgot to ask, My British... ummm... Lingo is it? Isn't quite that far well knowledgeable... I know trainers are shoes... but what is a jumper? Surely can't be like... an underwear kind of jumper ^_^.
Thank you,
Ryko
Thank you,
Ryko
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June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 57! Draco's been shot! In the stomach! No!!!!