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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKay, Im going to be sooo honest with you right now. I LOVE this story, I wish i was even half as skilled as you, I have been reading it for a couple days (minus the drinking, because its my town's festival, so I've been spending a few days celebrating..and consequently, between that and your story, IVE been slacking on mine, LOL. tottaly irrelevant...) Anyway, I have been itching to reveiw for a while now, (almost every chapter) But I held off, I was just going to leave you a MASSSSSIVE one at the end (58) Cuz thats as far as you've got thus far, but Seriously...It's sooo sad. I mean I've almost cried like 5 times, and then you wrote about choking up about Sirius and Remus..and i tottaly feel it. I did too, among the many other times. I just wanna show my support, and now that I've broken my wish to not reveiw till I got up to date, I'm sure I will be reveiwing every chapter I have left to read...
Please continue, and make it last as long as you possibly can!!! I'm too in love with it for it to end.
Shannon xoxox
person Ryko427
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello again!

I completely forgot this dream this morning when I woke up. It must of been an earlier one, but I remember it now. It wasn't the kind of dream I was hoping though. I was hoping for another kiss or something! But instead it was boring and frightful. Apparently Draco drank an aging potion. And when you age, apparently you heal among that time at an increased rate. Soon Draco was getting too old, almost in his late 40's before my mind shifted to another dream. It was quite scary, although I did see Draco in nothing but boxers, which I liked very much... but still no touching or kissing =/. Hopefully! I will have another dream, without an aging potion I pray to god, and it will involve... *nice* things...

Much Love
Ryko
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 59! She refused Hogwarts? Has a special gift? I sooo need more! Gotta know more about that comment!
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this chapter 3 times already. And I really like it. Harry screaming for Draco's life, crying over the position that Draco is in, kissing him on the forehead, it just proves that Harry really and truly cares for him. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person masha
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Draco'c Patronus is a lion!Now the true colour of you has been shown to everyone, Draco:) Maybe that's the monent Ron began to accept Draco.That's a wonderful chapter.Thank you for being so hard working!But please don't make Draco a bottom! I can accept Harry a top , but a bottom Draco...that's to much. I understand that 'they have a very err
person Ryko427
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello again fairest writer of em all.

Well last night was quite odd, so I will definitely tell you this funny and depressing story. Now I was finished reading Darker Side of Me last night. I was hopping that you updated, but I did get my fill of Harry & Draco from DSoM. Well during my dreams I came across a competition of some sort. I don't know exactly what it was. But all I remember is I was in the backseat of a car with the windows rolled down. In the front were two men I did not know, but seemed very wizardish by the look of their clothes. I looked out the window and saw Draco. Now of course I was not Harry this time, but me. Anyways. He looked at me very sadly and I reached my hand out the window as we drove by. He ran up to me and our hands brushed together. We weren't driving fast because we were in a parking lot. It was almost like outside of a Mall's entrance. Well Draco wanted to do more than just touch my hand. He ran up to the window and I stuck my head out and he kissed me while he was trying to catch up with the car's speed and eventually we were pulling out. I felt very nervous that people might be watching, but it did feel nice. It almost felt extremely real, more real than my first dream. When he stepped back he waved good-bye and I felt extremely depressed yet happy, but I didn't want him to leave. Damn dreams... wish they were the real thing. Love that blond boy.

Much Love
Ryko
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, Thank you so much for such a wonderful story. I just found this story today and read the entire thing in one sitting i couldnt stop. The angry sex scene was the absolute most erotic thing i think ive ever read. Ever. I didnt want this story to end. Please update soon.
person misslala
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great chapter :) I like how it played out and that Draco is going well, for the most part. :) I like that his was a Lion, it shows he actually has courage. :) Can't wait for more!
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 58! Dudley acted as if Petunia was a witch? Interesting! Sooo need more! Can they be trusted in headquarters?
person Ley
schedule June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha I just read chp. 56. And I have something to say. I love you. xD I was shocked that Draco really got shot..even thou I had the weird urge as I said in my last review. xD Death is great? I dont blame yea for borrowing the name. Lol.

As for when the were going into the city. Wow. All the bllod and dead bodies. And the air must have stank. I really liked how you told the differences between the different dead bodies. I think that really was a great idea.

Ron....I want to smack him. I mean every one else is well seem fine with it but him...gah.><

Yea!!!So we will have both top and bottom Harry and Draco....and maybe some kinky toys? xD I am joking. But yay for both top and bottom!!and Parsultongue xD..I just read a random fanfic with that in it...ahhh good times. More then like I will give you another review. *off to read ch 57*