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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person Ryko427
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter! So much cuteness was involved ^_^. Although lately no dreams -_-. Sorry I didn't review last night, I got caught up with someone on the phone for hours, and went to bed right after that. And thank you sooooo much for the cake! And wine... but I am not a fan of wine... *spills wine into a plant's soil* Maybe it will grow grapes to make wine now!

I thought it was cute that they finally held hands! They have never held hands, and Draco is not dangerous! Stupid newspaper.... they know nothing... And Kingsley! Omg! How could you?! HOW COULD YOU?! If you kill him off! I will kill you off! Kingsley is one of my most favorite characters! I can easily picture him in my head! Strong built black man with a thick African accent, bald, maybe a little facial hair, and that huge gold hoop earing! He sorta reminds me a djinn.... would be funny is he was half djinn ^_^! Oh and if you don't know what a djinn is, well it is like a Genie... or Geney? I think it is Genie... you know the blue dude from Aladin? That is a djinn.

Anyways! Loved chapter 60! We hit the breaking point, many more chapters to come I hope! Can't wait!

Much Love
Ryko
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perhaps it was because he hadn
person NightLo
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh...good development, now naturally they cared for each other and practically can be released as an offical couple...However, for Harry, if Potters are weak to dark forms of soul magic - how did this relate to his scar? Any bad influence and control? Definitely Harry needs more practices on Occlumens and Legilimens in order to protect his mind and soul and magic! Oh~~ and definitely more physical training and disarm/reple magic training, so that Harry can get near to Voldi and punch him in face...really - a top must-to-do list...

Ginny...memory charm and control spells...hehe...though memory charms will be too obvious, however, if ever...ever Ginny develops some attachment to others, or just simple control her to be with others and declare public....a once and for all removal technique for love rival!

For Black...well - one suggestion - as they are obsessed with powers, then...try to send some obsence pictures of Voldi and Harry to Bellatrix's mind and triggers her madness - a good and discreet way to remove her...BTW - remember to notify Tonks of her weakness...

And finally, Draco must find a way to hide himself, even in a glamour...and Harry should stay with him ...
person sunset20
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another wonderful chapter! I must tell you, I really needed this today! I have just finished reading HBP and I was shattered. I never really liked Dumbledore but I was sobbing during his funeral, it really got to me! Especially when Harry was thinking about Draco and what he might have to face now! Only seeing Draco healthy and happy with Harry could calm me down, so thank you! :D
person stasa
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanx for answering my anxious questions :)
They ware really bugging me... As for the new chapter, I am truly amazed that after 60 chapters you still managed to keep my full attention! I bow down to your writing skills *insert me bowing* :D
Like that the war is getting more intense, and even do I
person Ryko427
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry nodded to me and went to replace his own book before venturing over to the other side of the library. The goblin stood like a sentry at the door, his back to the contents of the vault as he waited for us to finish.

This makes me very impressed. This is what makes a good writer. The second sentence is very important because it shows that you push forward when writing, but you take a step behind to recap and go over a few things. I have never ever done that when writing cause I always rush through things and never ever recap.

I liked this chapter even if you don't. It did explain some things definitely going on with Draco. As for the weakness with Parsletongue, I have two theories on what that weakness entails and how you may use it.

1. Sex with Harry, no doubt Harry will use it when he wants to get at Draco ^_^.
2. Voldemort may use it to lure Draco into a trap, thats if Voldemort knows about this weakness.

I am also very interested as to how Bellatrix got into Azkaban. And if it wasn't her, who was it?

Oh an weakness to love potions? Well well well, I could concoct a love potion and Draco would adore me! Bwuahahhaha!

Ahem... I do hope, before the order reacts to another thing that Voldemort does, that you involve some cuddling, sex, and love time with Harry and Draco, and I do hope freaking Ginny... god how I hate that bitch, leaves them alone. If she freaking bothers them, and follows them around, and prods at Draco, well I hope that Harry hexes her, because then she might see how much Harry cares for Draco and will, pardon my french, FUCK OFF!

Now... Glad I got that out of my system, that she-weasel whore gets me worked up. Hate her. Yes I do! This isn't like how Draco said before how he hated Harry, but really loved him! I utterly hate Ginny, and I love Harry, and Draco... but Draco more...

There is another thing I wanted to mention! I love how you add little cute things just randomly in your writing between Draco + Harry! Like when Draco was running his hand over the tome, and Harry touched it smirking... I LOVE THAT STUFF! Little cute things makes me so happy ^_^. I am dieing to read chapter 60. Oh my god! It is going to be Chapter 60! FORGET THE COOKIES! GET SOME CAKE NOW!!! Erm... what goes with cake? Milk? Wine? Pfft, I want to be a chef, and I don't know what goes with cake -_-.

Much much much love love love!
Hopefully I will have another lovely dream tonight, possibly kissing I hope, must think very hard about Draco... but not too hard! Then I have to do something before I go to sleep -_-.
Anways! Nuff of that!
G'nite!
Ryko

(lol, instead of putting Ryko at first, I almost put Draco, I think it is a sign, thinking very much of him, dream of him may be possible! I will fill you in next morning if I do have one!)
person Ley
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*stares at the chapter*......what the hell.....O.o I had to re-read this acouple times. I had to make sure that I had read this right.

....I got the whole Malfoy blood line. That took awhile for me to get but I got it. It suck that Harry was in the books. I thought for the longest time that he was a pure-blood....weird I know..I am slow for some reason xD. Figures aht ginny would come back..I feel a fight is going to happen between Draco and ginny...maybe he might do something damaging.....hehehehehe....Opps....you didnt hear that. xD



Ok what?!?! Weakness to Parsultongue?!!? ....I hope that is something good......not bad...>< and if it is bad then it will end up good right?.....O.O
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well nice to know destroying a horcurx could do some good for draco. made him better. cant wait to see how harry uses the parsletounge (spelling is bad) on draco could be kninky.

lucious murdered. i personally think he deserved it but hey draco's daddy no matter what.

and do you have to bring back ginney? she is such a B.

well cant wait for your next chapter.
person misslala
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Draco's in trouble now! haha that's not good when he's been sighted - especially when they have been going to such lengths to keep him under wraps. Oh I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope his nightmare wasn't a portent of things to come. :( Evil Voldemort, always taking advantage of everything. At least they have some clues now as to ways to get at Voldie. I wonder what you have in store for us for the next installment.
schedule June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dammmit you know what blows?!?! In my last reveiw I was tottaly going to say something about Lucius being attracted to Voldy cuz of his weakness, but I didn't...Blast!
Now I'm going to write everything ever that seems important. If I can remember when the time to reveiw comes anyway:P
If Draco was spotted, wouldn't he have been spotted with Harry, Hermione and Ron? Even just Harry? I mean...they were together were they not? That would seem pretty relevant to me, If this big wanted death-eater is wandering about the bank with Harry Potter... Just wondering.
Great update!!
Update soon!!
Please, I would prefer no cookies..
Shannon xoxox