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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person misslala
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter as always. :) I found the scene with Draco and Neville to be enlightening. :) Thank you so much for sharing!!! I can't wait for the update!
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hark work for harry there
but i think he needed it
hmmm wondering if he'll see some of dracos memories like he did snapes
annnnnd valentines day soon
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person misslala
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My god, if Petunia sold out Draco, so help me! Although Bella seems like a good enough candidate. It does seem off that Harry, Ron or Hermione weren't mentioned. LOL Gods woman you have this thing planned so well and so very eloquently exocuted as well :) I can't wait for more. I'm a greedy fan!! LOL
person NightLo
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...Harry, Remus and Hermione got it all wrong - those who knew about that night, apart from DE and the Order, also includeed some students...esp. one red hair Ginny! And her love for Harry, care for Hermione and Ron would possibly 'protect' them from the public and the paper...Damn! Actually I quite agree with Draco's suggestion, though using a discreet potion would be more...more appropriate. And with Draco's skill, this would just be too easy for him!

For the training, that was nice, really - when you can have EVERYTHING, why would one ice prince demand revenge or getting himself hurt rather than sex and HOT HOT kink? Though I agree that only with Voldermort gone and Harry is still ALIVE with a COHERENT mind...would there be a future for both....but I am really tempt to read some kinky stuff like role play, cross dressing as maid/teacher-student...and other sexual aids... (but I doubt, even the wish is granted, they are unable to access those materials)...

If ever Ginny is the one, she needs to be revealed SOON...
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GOod chapter, I wish they didn't interupt. I would be interesting for Harry to finally be able to master defending his mind. I'm like soo confused about the article, well, not confused. But yea.. i dunno. I liked this chapter tho! Neville and Luna:D:D Luna is a mystery, thats for sure. Good chapter, can't wait for your next update!
Shannon xoxox
person Ley
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...hmm....I wonder who saw Draco.As you hinted at. I think he is right I think some one is warning him. I thought at first it could have been his mother but then I was like oh duh she is DEAD. The Black tamperyingy showed that. And like they said I dont think it was Snape....hmm....*ponders*

Now as for Luna...That girl is one of my other favorite characters. And if I could wish one character a happy ending it would be her. But she wont need it because she is always happy in her own little world. And I also was just wondering..How was Luna able to stay alive? Not that I would want her dead but Cho and Pansy have both died. And werent they a little bit mroe powerful then Luna? Well Pansy. So I kinda wonder where Luna was all this time during the war? You know...I was just thinking out loud. ^^;;; But I did like her mark to Draco. Totally Luna.

Hehehe I liked that game you made for Harry and Draco. *snickers* I love how he left no loop holes either. Good Draco. I cant wait to see more of this game. xD

Hurt GINNY! >.< I dont think anyone will miss her. xD
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 62! Nice chapter!
person Ryko427
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
+_+

If you kill off... well Kingsley I guess I can deal with.. but if there is an unhappy ending you will pay dearly!

And what is GOING ON?!!??!?! So confuzzled and entices me to read more and more. I can't wait for the next chapter, erm you can get some chips too... or actually... some cereal and milk... The whole cookie thing isn't too good for my figure... Especially after eating 61 of them -_-

Anyways! I always love your chapters, and I adored this one! It was cute, and funny, and I want Draco to kick Ginny's teeth in. I hate her, and I want the game to continue! NOW! It was just getting good! Soon shirts would be next! Hehehe, shirtless Harry and Draco ^_^. OH AND I SOOOOOO WANT HARRY TO WIN! HARRY NEEDS TO FUCK DRACO! DRACO HAS HAD IT COMING FOR A LONG TIME! NEEDS TO BE DONE!<333333

Anyways! Much Love of course.
Ryko
person stasa
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope Draco teaches Harry how to defend his mind, he need
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry if I was a day late with my review. Too much homework at hand, as what I've said in my e-mail, and I was only able to read chapter 60 at around 10 pm yesterday. Anyway, I included my review for chapter 60 with chapter 61's, so this might be pretty long. Hope I won't bore you with my observations, Daft Fear. Anyway, here goes...

Review: Chapter 60
That Parseltongue bit was really REALLY clever. I have always been wondering why Lucius Malfoy swore allegiance to Voldemort, a half-blood, when he despises anyone who is not a pure-blood. Your explanation about Malfoys having a weakness for Parseltongue really suits that. I wonder how you came up with that idea. JK Rowling really has some serious competition.