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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this will be another looooonnnnnnnggggggggggggg review for both Chapter 62 and 63. Again, I apologize for all the trouble.

Review: Chapter 62
I must say, the one thing that struck me the most was the Legilimency and Occlumency "test" that Draco did to the Gryffindors. Especially with Ginny. It just shows how much of an arrogant git she is. I sometimes wonder why she is put in Gryffindor and not in Slytherin...I mean she's too arrogant (and sly) as Draco! The only difference is she lacks the common sense Draco has.

It's not that obvious (yeah right) that I'm not much of a fan of Ginny.

"Locked in a room with those three, purposefully throwing all the most violent and brutal curses and hexes that you can imagine while they pitifully attempt to defend themselves.
That
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. and even if i haven't reviewed after every chapter, i'm still here avidly awaiting the next installment. =)
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 64! I think Neville is coming into his own.
person stasa
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Snape is good, I know he is, please, please don
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it is nice to see some common ground between draco and nevile. i honestly hope all of them get bella at the same time. could you imagine what that would be like. kinda like draco and friends that one train ride home. ginney's attitude towards draco is something else. she defientaly does not like having to lose to draco. and her attitude might impare her ability to learn what draco needs to teach her.

keep up the excellent work.

schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 63! I can see Neville being strong in occulmency. He's been hiding that secret for years. And attempting to live on as well. Glad Harry is getting better. He better hurry.
person stasa
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter and I liked that Draco and Neville made some kind of a, not a connection, wouldn
person misslala
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOoh I like hot angsty make up sex. Whew!!!!! How brilliant! I love it! I can't wait for more.
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it =]
and cant wait for the kinky stuff youve got in mind lol
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schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Draco no love on Valentines Day. I like the way Neville proved to be good at something. Cant wait to see what is coming. Guess ill just have to wait and see? thanks for the goodies *takes sweets* did i mention i love this story.