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for Memoirs of a Serpent's Son

by Angelsfear

person Ley
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!I hate that my computer.!!!I had this long long review for you and then its like FREEZE! Hahaha computer user. So there went all my writing.I will try to write it all again.

I really liked how you have the theory about all the different horxs. Thats pretty cool. I also have to agree with you on the imfrui(sp). I know I would have a hard time killing those things. I know it would effect me you know?

Also about the house..I dont know why I care about it but the Door? Why did it shut!?Why couldnt they get it open!? Sorry I am weird sometimes. xD You know? And then my other problem would be where was Tonks and the guys? Was it like what happened at Harry's house?!?! They couldnt hear or see them? I dont know just wondering...I am weird.

OMG GINNY!!>) I knew it. xD I mean or you could want us to think that she is "EVIL" and then you would pull fast one on us! HA I am on to you now! Jk. Lol But really IF Draco and Harry come out of this or if Ginny is ever in Draco's site I wonder what Draco would do to her?! I know that he would give her a piece of his mind. >D...I wonder if you can make some one go crazy by using your mind?hmmmm...Dont know. But if what your hencing at I have no doubt in my mind that Draco will get her back...oh he will get her back VERY good. >xD I really cant wait for that!!!

POOR LUNA!!! I mean I knew she was crazy from the begining(Hence why we all love her :D) But I wasnt really shocked if she went mad..intill she did! xD I was like O^o. I did laugh thou. It was kinda funny to see what she would do if she DID went mad.

IT CANT END!!>.< I dont want it too!! You will have to start a new story then!! Right!?!? lol. I am now a hug fan of yours. Also just wondering will there be any Kinky sex later..if later? *takes a cookie* I will wait for the next chapter.ehheheeI wonder what Dracos reaction you know? Will it be the whole "You little *beep, beep* Slut!I will kill you!" or will it be "I knew it! You were leading us on!" or something...or will it be both..either way I really cant wait to see his reaction...and i wonder what Harrys will be.....hmm..maybe he will be shock!??!hehe I really wnat to know now. xD

~Ley
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that made me feel really sorry for draco
and i think you're definaitly right about him being insecure

and about a weasley dieing ... there are so many at least one has to
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person stasa
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Draco
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ginny isn't good enough to fake memories so who polyjuiced themselves to look like Harry? Sooo need chapter 65!
person Ley
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. O.O I saw some real Ginny bashing there. xD Not that I dont mind. Lol. As for Harry ahd Draco's little game woot! xD I have to say that thank god that was a dream of Ginnys. I think Draco would have gone mad if he found out those where true....thou...He kind already is. xD

CHARLIE!??! Whoa there...that I wasnt expecting. O.O Man..but youa re right. THIS is a war. And I give you soo much credit for making it feel like a 'war'. You are right. Good people do have to die in wars. Its just the way it is.

I really hope that Harry knows what he is getting into. lol.

Now, I agree with you also on the whole Draco thing. I kind dont like it when he is all HIGH and mighty. I dont mind it but I think he is human too. I hate it when they have fanfic where either Harry or Draco cheat on another. If its rape thats different..but Draco and Harry are just soo....Prefect for each other.Why would they cheat you know?

Hahaha. Great reasoning for killing Charlie. I know. You cnat kill Bill. Dude he is the only hottest Weasly. Jk lol. But After the whole "werewolfe" thing that happened in book 6...I just..I hope to dear god that JKR DOSENT kill him. First she makes him scared for life.(his face) Then he is half werewolfe, and if she killed him...well lets say there wouldnt be many fans that would be happy. >> Percy...GAH..I do hope he dies. I think that would help some of us crazy fans out. Lol. Eh...really I could care less about Ron..I think I have said that before..but it would be sad if he did die...as for Ginny..I hope Draco poisons her....>> Or maybe she Betrays them all! Like she hands them over to the darkside! It might explan some of the reason why some people are going missings...She has actess to the minsitry...hmm...Sorry. Its just what makes my little insane yaoi fangirl happy. xD I know that cant happen. But its worth dreaming right? xD Fred and Geroge are other characters that I would be horror struck if they died in the book or this story. I would be like O.O YOU DIDNT!? Then I would freak out and then about 10 minutes later after I had some ice cream I would be fine. xD Lupin, Tonks, Moody....hmm...that would something differet? As for Draco and Harry.......I wouldnt have it any other way. If they came out perfectly find I would be like...eh...oh is that possible? But I DO expect them to live...just not all in the best of health....hehheeh...hmm....I just read something...men getting pregenet.....xD Sorry I had to share. But I would think that one of them would have some broken bones you know? Maybe they might start a little family...wow I am already thinking of the future. xD WHAT YOU CAN NOT END IT!!! NOT THAT SOON! WHAT AM I GOING TO DO FOR THE REST OF MY SUMMER?! I have already read all your other fics.....I really hope you write more.^^......wow..this is turning into a long long review..xD I also had a question for you but I can remember......oh man...>-< Also Yay for More Death Note. xD *takes a smut cookie*Omg these are yummy....you should be a cheif. xD Cant wait for the next chapter. ^^
person NightLo
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally I have enough rest and strength to face computer again...

Well - actually I must admit that...such chance of torturing Ginny was way too good, as this Ginny is practically a prat in disguise...

However, for Neville, though he was not BLW, still he was a first-war veteran...and I agreed, such fate was worse, maybe he has been tortured and made fun of in his past, making up his present presonalities. Still, as pointed out by Dumbledore, he has great potentials, he has great potential to accept, to forgive and to love. He really can be a great help - even more helpful than Ginny - and he has proven himself correct...good work, Nev.

But finally...I see my most happy sentence of this story - really, this is everyone's war, and all must be prepared. False hope on relying on others to protect you or doing for you is incorrect, you must fight for something you want...and Ginny better to think that Harry was hers...sure this is wrong and even Molly and Arthur cannot help her...

And for the last horcrux and the link with Kingsley...well, has the information of destroying the fourth horcrux and the plan leaked out? I agree the release must be either a trap or a hint from Snape, and this was the reason that they fight - really...just like family fight between godfather, son and son-in-law, really really interesting! However, having a fight on Valentine Day, what a memory!

BTW - would Draco and Hermione try to brew some potions and...lubricant for future use? You know - for precaution!
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
you can tell it's getting near the end though
kinda sad cos its been so long
i'm amazed that you've been able to keep it so good the whole way through and keep everyone reading =]

glad you made draco taller too, he just doesn't suit being short
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person misslala
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are still doing so wonderful! :) I love it. I hate that CHarlie died, but I am aware that people are going to die. I am interested to see what happens at the Orphanage and whether Sanpe turns up, if it is an ambush or if nothing happens at all aside from finding a horcrux. whee! *hugs* Hopefully things will get better soon!
person Ryko427
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I absolutely love love love the past two chapters. Sorry I didn't review, but I have been busy with someone and have been going to bed late without reading. Teheheh, anyways! I think you are definitely doing a marvelous job, and you keep that suspense going with Snape and such which is great! I do hope Snape is a goody goody =( because if he is bad, well... it will be Draco's fault that they are led into a trap! I would like to continue reviewing right now, but I am very tired and my mind can't think of what else to possibly say about the chapters except I love them and all the smut your adding ^_^.

Much Love, and Keep up the Good Work!
Ryko
schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet again antoher wonderful chapter. i say good for neville standing up to ginney. someone else has got to tell that girl what for.

the sex was hot!!! so wonderful.

next chapter please.