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for Pure Instinct

by sesshomarufangirl

person miku
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so even if I have to wait a while to read more I would concider it worth the wait. Keep up the fantastic work!
person misswarchan
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If the wait is going to be as long as before then I'd perfur shoter chapters that come more often! (I thought you gave up this fic, I really did *cries*)
person Lina
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please do an update soon!!! I love this story!!!!
person Jan
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! This is so exciting!!! Though I got to say that I feel bad for Aiden, I mean he's almost being used as you would a pet. Who is Severus real mate, how will he know? Is there a way that you could still make Aiden his life mate? I really hope so.

Please update chapter 7 soon. ^_^
person Extraho
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is getting exciting. i wonder what everyone will do
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has been so great! I must say however that if you don't let us know pretty soon who Sev's mate is I might very well pull out all my hair in frustration. [Thinks very hard for several second] Yes quite so. Also I may have to throw in a right proper wobbley with whole throwing myself down, screaming, crying, kicking, and making a right brat of myself. [Thinks some more while tapping chin]
Yes that should do. Now I shall leave you to continue with your wonderful writting.
[Bows politely]
person Loussi
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow i love this new creature, that's the first time i read abotu this kind and i already love it. I hope you updated soon i am looking forward to see what happens with severus next.
person ecila
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I usualy don`t go for submissive Severus, but you got it to work :) And I also loved the fact that you mentioned that women could be dominants too.... too many good fics are ruined by that...

schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww bless you. This is an exelent fic so far, I really enjoy reading it. Perhaps you copuld describe the new looks of out beloved potions master in more speciphic detail? Or are you leaving it open to out wild imagination? Both are equally good choices. Keep up the fabulous work darling!
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I like :) ::MV::