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by Alucinor

person Brittney
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi there I was hoping to say that I think that this story was amazing and you should consider continuing it please please please please please please continue the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shh
schedule April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More, please!! This is a great start to a fantastic plotline- hopefully you'll be able to continue it soon!!! Thanks!
person Traybell
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol look forward to reading those shame putting stories you have up sleeve:) I like this hope you can get some plot bunnies to help you finish it. Thanx for sharing.
person Darkless
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Even with it's violent beginnings (which I'm sure is important to the plot) we see a very fragile, paranoid and frightened Harry emerge, and his I'm fine mask isn't fooling Hermione.

What little is there is well written and I'd really like to see this story continiued. Nicely done.
person Makovaso
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, please update soon.
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should back-up your stories to an external drive of some sort. I keep mine on a thumb drive because I tend to switch which computer I'm working on (desktop or laptop) my laptop is currently having problems that my compter geek friend can't fix *bleh*
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Although you lost your notes, I do hope that you do find a way to continue. I do wish to read more!
person Juana13
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh i think i almost cried at the first chapter and the first half of the second.
how could that happen to harry....
please update soon. this is very, very good and i hope you dont discontinue it. good luck on continuing your writings.
that sux that you lost all of it. i'd go crazy if that happened to me, which actually has happened, and I remember, I did go crazy for a long while.
: ) glad you're not giving up.
cant wait to read more of this wonderful story.
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you really did a good job of making harry's depression real...but where's snape?
person Ewe
schedule September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is...."O.o OMFG! that was a scary beginning" but that was good. better than most i would say.

please continue with this story....i would love to know where it goes from there

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