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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know...since Harry has no knowledge on what has happened to him, how does he feel, how should he feel...some stuff like that, he needs outside help to figure out all feelings! E.g. talk with some gay population, Hermione and Ron etc. It really would be lovely to read Harry wanting revenge without actually knowing his own feeling, that would stir up a lot of humurous consequences.
If Draco...only if...he does have some feeling towards Harry, like pulling pigtail acts, all that would happend naturally (if Harry has actually got him back). However, if you would like to continue Draco to be one of cold heart, cunning, manipulative and others, his feelings need to describe also, e.g. change of heart/longing/jealousy...seeing him falling would also be very very funny...
If Draco...only if...he does have some feeling towards Harry, like pulling pigtail acts, all that would happend naturally (if Harry has actually got him back). However, if you would like to continue Draco to be one of cold heart, cunning, manipulative and others, his feelings need to describe also, e.g. change of heart/longing/jealousy...seeing him falling would also be very very funny...
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it i would love another couple chapters :)
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this means revenge....harry can do no less.