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Hahahaha Draco is the best. He's deliciously mischievous and evil! I also love Harry's half-hearted comment 'I like breasts!" hahahah I love it! I hope you update soon!!

I sooo can't wait for chapter 3!!!

Actually to engage a more tension situation, a 3rd party is always helping...you have many choices, e.g. Seamus to talk with Harry on homo situation, Michael/Draco/Justin in showing interest in either Harry or Draco...that would definitely tense it up...as Harry is determined to get revenge, while Draco wants sole attention from his new toy, neither of them would love to see interference...

:) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hmm... you write Draco extremely well. I love the inherent snarkyness in his attitude... well written! =D I realize you only have so much spare time, but I look forward to reading more of this story when you get the chance! ;)

Hell no not turned off, not turned off at all. Need another chapter. And there is nothing wrong with your writing.

Hmm... the answer 'Fuck YES' seems appropriate. *grin*

That was wonderful... I always love reading good foreplay... fantastic. ;) I really do hope that you continue this - you have an avid fan in me if you do! :D

you have got to be kidding, yes.... I think you should continue this. You said that it seemed all over the place, but I don't think that at all, if anything that just adds to the confusion that Harry is currently going through. Don't know if you have a long story planned out or not but I can see that you could easily do several more chapters to bring this to a "satisfying" conclusion. Just be careful and don't make R,H and G too "cookie cutter", their interactions with Harry and Draco situation can be just as interesting and "deep" as between our boys. You could do a chapter from Draco's POV, I would be interested to know what is going on in his head and what he is planning. Good luck with this, it is a great start, and I would love to read more.

very good, i definitely want more though. You cant leave it like that, if you do you are evil.

*giggle* Yumm! Yeah, it does wander a little, but that's a matter for editing. On the whole, I think it's got promise. It's certainly nicely subtle in terms of plot and motivation, and the slash was good too. :)