rate_review Reviews

In your fist chapter, you mentioned that Snape and Draco's hotel is located next to an interstate. Just where are they? England dose not have 'states,' and thus have no 'interstate highways,' so Snape and Draco can not be in that country. Besides the United States, there are several other countries that have 'states.' Will you please specify which country they are in? (England has something called 'motorways,' did you mean this?)

You wrote: After finally realizing he was headed in the wrong direction, Snape found it with his foot instead. Trying not to let his frustration get the best of him Snape bit his tongue before climbing into the large tub. Snape sank into the water, mentally thanking the kind man who was watching over him. He reached for the bath knobs, turning the water off.

Why is Snape having trouble finding the tub if the water is running? Wouldn't he be able to hear where it was? Or dose he have problems with his hearing?

Oh dear! Next chapter......

~ Very well written, you have allowed room for a distinct foreshadowing of what it to come with out being redundant and I am very intrigued as to where this story will go. I can