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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kinky! I likes!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice attention getter :P That's great! I love it! :)
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this!
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
looks like draco is uber horny
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, this is the highlight of my day!!! so fucking funny!!!! hot too!!!! you are a legend and i love you cause i need major cheer-ups today. thankyou darling, for making things all better with lovely draco tantrum. love it.
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March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! He's going to be quite embarrassed later!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1--heehee!! Draco's POV! YAY
*gasp* I LOVE how Draco has numbered and "patented" his glares!!!! That's SOOOOO FUNNY! (Nice touch!)
OH MY GOD!! *choking with laughter* Draco...pouting...being ignored!!! PRICELESS! And I love the way it's written, especially for that!
Pouting and glaring!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (I'm such a lunatic) HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHA
AHAHA the "super pout" OH SHITE I CAN'T BREATHE!!!
OH FUCKING HELL THE DIALOGUE IS PERFECT!!!!! The irony is killing me here: "Don't you 'please' me!" and yet, Draco wants Harry to please him!!!! I know exactly what you meant, though, and I can appreciate a good play-on-words-in-writing!
Oh fuck!! Draco's speech is so HOTT!! I want to fuck him (and I don't even HAVE a penis!! haha) if Harry's being too oblivious.
(The only thing, and I wonder if you wondered about this yourself. At the end of his speech, he asks "Do I make myself clear" and then "Do I have your attention now"...it almost seems like the first question is the most poignant, and then the repetition of asking is sort of a let-down, even though the title of the story is the second question. IMO, Draco's speech should end with "I want to feel you come so hard you black out." and then Harry responds to THAT with, "Merlin, Draco!" and THEN Draco says to him, "Do I have your attention now, Potter?" And that, in my mind, is the ONLY thing that can make this exquisite snapshot better!
But it's such a little thing...just a suggestion)
Mmmmmmmm, I can just picture it! Are you sure there's no Chapter 2?? This was fanbloodytastic and I really enjoyed it!
*gasp* I LOVE how Draco has numbered and "patented" his glares!!!! That's SOOOOO FUNNY! (Nice touch!)
OH MY GOD!! *choking with laughter* Draco...pouting...being ignored!!! PRICELESS! And I love the way it's written, especially for that!
Pouting and glaring!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (I'm such a lunatic) HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHA
AHAHA the "super pout" OH SHITE I CAN'T BREATHE!!!
OH FUCKING HELL THE DIALOGUE IS PERFECT!!!!! The irony is killing me here: "Don't you 'please' me!" and yet, Draco wants Harry to please him!!!! I know exactly what you meant, though, and I can appreciate a good play-on-words-in-writing!
Oh fuck!! Draco's speech is so HOTT!! I want to fuck him (and I don't even HAVE a penis!! haha) if Harry's being too oblivious.
(The only thing, and I wonder if you wondered about this yourself. At the end of his speech, he asks "Do I make myself clear" and then "Do I have your attention now"...it almost seems like the first question is the most poignant, and then the repetition of asking is sort of a let-down, even though the title of the story is the second question. IMO, Draco's speech should end with "I want to feel you come so hard you black out." and then Harry responds to THAT with, "Merlin, Draco!" and THEN Draco says to him, "Do I have your attention now, Potter?" And that, in my mind, is the ONLY thing that can make this exquisite snapshot better!
But it's such a little thing...just a suggestion)
Mmmmmmmm, I can just picture it! Are you sure there's no Chapter 2?? This was fanbloodytastic and I really enjoyed it!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well he definitely has my attention. This is hilarious. Love it.
Ja ne
Kireania
Ja ne
Kireania
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahahahahahahaaa!!!
Ow, my side...my side.
Ow, my side...my side.
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHA, oh my gawd, you nailed Malfoy.
I had a great time reading this.
I always love your work, but this is the best one yet!
I had a great time reading this.
I always love your work, but this is the best one yet!