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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the idea and everything, but for the first chapter it seems a bit rushed. You could've spread it out for at least 2 chapters, but thats just my opinion. other than that i like it.
schedule
March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where's the rest? You tease. :(
schedule
March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly! I soooo need chapter 2!
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! OMG! Please don't let Lucius take Draco away from Lupin. Oh Gods, update soon please.
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March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Na, it's perfect!
Well thought out plot and
what a plot!
:)
Looking for more soon!
EG
Well thought out plot and
what a plot!
:)
Looking for more soon!
EG
schedule
March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. I think you should continue with it. Please.
schedule
March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo... More please! I really love how this is developing!
schedule
March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. Maybe Lucius should be a good guy in this one. (I like a good Lucius) And Narcissa should be the evil abusive mother/wife. Maybe Lucius, Remus and Snape can all get together and take care of Draco. While Narcissa causes alot of trouble for everyone. Just some thoughts. :)
schedule
March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I actually like this I think you have a good thing going here. I really would like to see you continue this.
schedule
March 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very interesting start to your story! I would love to see where this goes. I feel for Remus and Draco, and I agree, make Narcissa a bitch, (most fics make Lucius the bitch, but I'm reading one at the moment where Narcissa is the bitch and it is very good!)
Can't wait to see what happens next, please keep posting!!
~*Star*~
Can't wait to see what happens next, please keep posting!!
~*Star*~